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18．Shenzhen Daily 就"Health and Wealth，Which Is More Important？"在读者中展开讨论．假设你是李华，向报社投稿．请依据下列要点，适当添加细节，写一篇100词左右的短文．首句已给出，不计入总词数．
1．财富比健康重要．富人受人尊敬，而穷人受歧视；
2．健康胜于财富，健康的人才能享受生活；
3．你的看法．
Health and Wealth，Which Is More Important？
Some people hold the view that wealth is more important than health．
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Answer 1

分析 本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．而且我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来．本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化．这就要求平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
【亮点说明】They think that a wealthy person will be respected in this world，while a poor person will be looked down upon by others．这句话里面有宾语从句，也能正确使用连词while，还有Only if a person enjoys good health，can he really enjoy his life．这是一个倒装句

解答 Health and Wealth，Which Is More Important？
      Some people hold the view that wealth is more important than health．They think that a wealthy person will be respected in this world，while a poor person will be looked down upon by others．（高分句型一）Therefore，a person who tries all means to make money will be considered （to be） a hero no matter whether he is in good health or poor health．（高分句型二）
       However，the majority of people believe that health is more important than wealth．For example，a healthy scientist can achieve more success in his scientific research．Only if a person enjoys good health，can he really enjoy his life．（高分句型三）
       In my opinion，health is more important than wealth．Good health can bring us success as well as real happiness．So health is the most important thing that one has to treasure in the world．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．