Question

14．假如你是李华．现在你写一封信告诉你的外国朋友Peter如何保持健康．要点如下．注意：100词左右，所给的句子不计入总词数
1、健康对我们任何人来说都是最为重要的． 2、注意你的饮食．均衡饮食．
3、锻炼是必要的． 4、要养成良好的生活习惯．不抽烟，多休息．
Dear Peter，
    I am writing to you to tell you something about health．
        ．
 Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息写一封信告诉你的外国朋友Peter如何保持健康，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：分别从健康对我们任何人来说都是最为重要的．注意你的饮食．均衡饮食．锻炼是必要的．要养成良好的生活习惯．不抽烟，多休息几个方面来讨论该话题 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：In order to 以便，为了，pay attention to 注意，are rich in富含，Firstly首先，Secondly其次，Finally最后
What's more而且，stay away from远离
In order to stay healthy，we need some common knowledge．（高分句型一）
We should eat lots of fruit and vegetables，because they are rich in fiber and low in fat．（高分句型二）
People who do running every day usually have st ronger hearts than those who don't．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Peter，
    I am writing to you to tell you something about health．
    Health is the most important for us．In order to stay healthy，we need some common knowledge．（高分句型一）
    Firstly，pay attention to the diet．We should eat lots of fruit and vegetables，because they are rich in fiber and low in fat．（高分句型二）Don't have a lot of food that contains too much fat，such as butter．Don't drink too much coffee，either．  Secondly，exercise is necessary．Regular exercise can help us keep from getting fat．People who do running every day usually have st ronger hearts than those who don't．（高分句型三）  Finally，form good living habits．We should sleep for about 8 hours at night，and never work too hard．What's more，stay away from cigarettes．
                                                                                                                                    yours，
                                                                                                                                    Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．