Question

14．假设你叫李华，是某学校高中学生．你英国的笔友Tony听说你参加了学校的徒步旅行社团，他对此很感兴趣，来信询问你徒步旅行有什么好处．请根据以下要点给他回封信，介绍徒步旅行的好处．
要点：1．亲近自然；
2．拥抱健康；
3．结识朋友；
4．增长见识．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Tony，
In your last letter，you asked me to introduce the benefits of hiking．
         ．
Best wishes．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本题是要求写一封回信介绍徒步旅行的好处，时态为以一般现在时和一般将来时为主；开头点明来信的缘由；正文具体介绍具体好处（题干要点为四点，分四点具体介绍）；结尾总结全文．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：get close to接近；scenic spots景点；Firstly首先；Secondly其次；Thirdly第三；Fourthly第四；In this way用这种方式；In a word总之；
Secondly，hiking is a kind of good exercise which can bring us health．（高分句型一）
 Fourthly，hiking will help increase our knowledge of geography and history，which can open our mind．（高分句型二）

解答 Dear Tony，
     In your last letter，you asked me to introduce the benefits of hiking．The following are some of them．
     Firstly，we can get close to nature and enjoy the beautiful scenery in different places．We can also visit some famous cities and scenic spots．Secondly，hiking is a kind of good exercise which can bring us health．（高分句型一） Your muscles will get stronger and stronger by hiking often．Thirdly，we can meet and make friends with people with different interests．In this way，we can understand how differently other people live．Fourthly，hiking will help increase our knowledge of geography and history，which can open our mind．（高分句型二）
     In a word，hiking has many benefits．I hope you do join the hiking club and enjoy hiking．
     Best wishes．
                                                                                                                                                             Yours，
                                                                                                                                                             Li Hua．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．