Question

 请根据下面提供的内容写一篇人物简介。完整地表达所有的信息点，字数120左右。

人物简介	李娜，1982年2月26 tl出生，从小就对运动有天赋，6岁幵始练习羽毛球，9岁转学网球。
主要经历及获得荣誉	1. 2002年：离开网球场，到大学读书；两年后重返球场； 2. 在包括她丈夫在内的几位著名教练的指导下，进步神速； 3. 2011年:法国公开赛女子单打冠军，第一位获得大满贯赛事单打冠军的亚洲网球选手。
别人对她的评价	1. 坚定的信心，履行诺言； 2. 你的评价……

?生词提更

French Open法闰公开赛singles title女单冠军Grand Slam大满贯?写作支招

一) 写作定性

本文为简单介绍人物的文章，也即人物传记。要求简介人物的生平，业绩及别人对其评价。时态多为一般过去式，现在时。表达以陈述句为多。这类文章通常按照时间顺序来组织。从写作要求可看出文章内容里既要包括对人物的生平的介绍，还要包括他人的评价及作者自己的主观看法。文章可分为两段，一为李娜的经历成就，二为对李娜的评价。

二) 难点突破

1.可用词汇

childhood, practice, badminton, coach, introduce, has a gift for,took a break,with the help of,under the guidance of,follow the instructions of,making achievements/ progress/ im?provement ( s) ，regard ... as,strong determination/mind, think highly of,keep one's word

2.结构模仿

叙述经历和成绩：运用诸多短语和分词结构使语言地道简洁。

Asimov's life began in Russia, where he was born on 2 January, 1920.(人教新课标教材选修⁷,16页)

It was when Asimov was eleven old that his talent for writing became obvious.(人教新课标教材选修7,16页)

With the help /Under the guidance of these good teachers, including Mr. Smith /Following the instructions of several good teachers, Henry has been making greater and greater achieve?ments/ progress/ improvement") rapidly in painting.

He won the competition，becoming the first Chinese who got a gold medal for China.

对人物的评价：运用regard ... as和in my opinion,I think等清晰地表明观点和评价。

Many people regard him as one of the most important leaders in the 20th century and think highly of his contributions to his motherland.

In my opinion/view，he is really a great man.

I think that he is not only intelligent but also very brave.

What impressed me most was his courage when facing the coming danger.

3.参考句型

sb. has a gift for sth.对某事有天分

With the help of sb.…在某人的帮助下……

sb. made great progress/achievements/improvements取得巨大的进步/成就/提高

sb. is regarded as...某人被看做.....

think highly of sb.高度评价/赞扬某人

What impressed sb. most was...给某人留下印象的是.....

 一试身手

Answer 1

 Li Na's life began in Wuhan,where she was born on 26 January, 1982. It was when she was six years old that she began to play badminton and was introduced to play tennis when she was nine. In 2002 she took a break from tennis to study at university. But two years later she returned. With the help / (Under the guidance ) of some famous coaches，including her husband /Following the in?structions of several famous coaches，she has been making greater and greater achievements/ pro?gress/ improvement( s) rapidly. As a result, she won the 2011 French Open singles title, becoming the first player from Asia to win a Grand Slam in singles.

Many people regard Li Na as a person with strong determination/mind and think highly of her for keeping her word. In my opinion, what im?pressed me most was not only her excellent per?formance in competitions but also her courage of challenging greater goals. She is really an out?standing player.