Question

在英语课堂上，你的周围有一些学习效率高的同学，他们表现突出，这与他们良好的习惯是分不开的。请就此话题用英语写一篇120词左右的短文，举一两个例子说明他们的良好习惯，并谈谈你的看法。

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Some students have always been very efficient at schoolwork, among whom, Li, monitor of our class, is an example. He distinguishes himself as the most productive student in the class.

When asked why he is always so productive, Li responded that it was some good habits that benefited him greatly and enabled him to be quite effective at schoolwork. Li always has a strictly-followed plan, for he believes that efficiency depends on good organization. Besides, he makes full use of his time. He listens attentively and takes notes in class, keeping close pace with the teacher. After class, he not only finishes the homework but also makes sure that consolidation work has been done. Moreover, he attaches great importance to critical thinking, with which he never accepts anything blindly.

From Li we can learn that a student’s good performance and success is closely connected with his good habits. Good habits are very important. We may benefit from them or suffer from the absence of them.

【解析】

试题分析：考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮点说明】 范文中运用一些常见的短语benefit sb 使某人受益；makes full use of充分利用；takes notes做笔记；depends on依靠；attaches great importance to认为。。很重要；suffer from遭受；When asked why he is always so productive, Li responded that it was some good habits that benefited him greatly and enabled him to be quite effective at schoolwork.这个句子中考查到非谓语动词，第一个that引导宾语从句，第二个that引导定语从句；Moreover, he attaches great importance to critical thinking, with which he never accepts anything blindly.这个句子中with which 引导非限制性定语从句；

考点： 开放性作文