Question

1．近年来，很多父母选择陪伴孩子读书学习，陪读已成为一种普遍现象．请你根据以下要点写一篇短文，内容应包括：
1．简要描述陪读现象；2．分析父母陪读的原因（2至3个）；3．发表你对此的看法．

注意：词数120词左右．
Should Our Parents Accompany Us in Studying at School？
In recent years，many parents choose to accompany their children in studying，which has aroused a wide concern．
These parents are willing to leave their hometown，even quit their jobs to follow their children into the campus．Most of them rent an apartment nearby so as to take good care of their children．Parents consider it necessary to offer a better living condition to the kids．Meanwhile，it can allow them to keep track of the kids'academic performance．Nevertheless，what they've ignored is that it will get their kids into the habit of being dependent．Thus，they will never develop the ability of self-control in the future．
Trust leads to independence．So it seems to me that parents should create room for children's growth and study in order to ensure their overall development．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇关于陪读现象的议论文．根据题目要求可知用第三人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一简要描述陪读现象；二分析父母陪读的原因；三点明负面影响；四发表对此的看法．
高分句型：
1．In recent years，many parents choose to accompany their children in studying，which has aroused a wide concern．句子里Which引导非限制性定语从句，代指主句内容；arouse表示"激起，引发"．
近几年，许多家长选择陪读，这一件事引起了广泛地关注．
2．Nevertheless，what they've ignored is that it will get their kids into the habit of being dependent．句子里主语从句是what they've ignored；表语从句是that it will get their kids into the habit of being dependent．
但是，他们忽视的问题是这会让学生养成依赖的习惯．

解答 Should Our Parents Accompany Us in Studying at School？
In recent years，many parents choose to accompany their children in studying，which has aroused a wide concern．【高分句型一】（简要描述陪读现象）
These parents are willing to leave their hometown，even quit their jobs to follow their children into the campus．Most of them rent an apartment nearby so as to take good care of their children．Parents consider it necessary to offer a better living condition to the kids．Meanwhile，it can allow them to keep track of the kids'academic performance．（分析父母陪读的原因）Nevertheless，what they've ignored is that it will get their kids into the habit of being dependent．【高分句型二】Thus，they will never develop the ability of self-control in the future（点明负面影响）
Trust leads to independence．So it seems to me that parents should create room for children's growth and study in order to ensure their overall development．（发表对此的看法）

点评 考查提纲式话题作文．
本文是一篇英语短文，内容齐全，有自己的观点，同时结构严谨，布局合理，使用高级句子．Most of them rent an apartment nearby so as to take good care of their children．动词不定式做目的状语；另外，Meanwhile，Nevertheless，Thus，So，in order to的运用为文章增色添彩．