Question

9．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
    增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
    删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）画掉．
    修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
    注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
          2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
       I am always very interested in the traveling．My reasons are quite simply and clear．If someone is not satisfied with my opinion，I shall be greatly surprising at his way of thinking．On the one hand，traveling increase our knowledge of the world．Only by travel can we visit local places of interest，listen to the story about the places and have a taste of different local foods．On the other hand，traveling is very good to our health．While we are traveling，we can breathe fresh air or exercise our bodies as well．Usually，people are often traveling are in good health．In a word，I sincerely hope everybody will grasp as much opportunities as possible to travel．

Answer 1

分析 本文讲述了作者喜欢旅游的原因．
我非常喜欢旅游．在旅游的过程中我们不仅可以了解世界，而且可以听到当地的故事，品尝美食．我们可以呼吸到新鲜的空气，锻炼身体．总之希望每个人都能抓住尽可能多的机会去旅行．

解答 I am always very interested in the traveling．My reasons are quite simply and clear．If someone is not satisfied with my opinion，I shall be greatly surprising at his way of thinking．On the one hand，traveling increase our knowledge of the world．Only by travel can we visit local places of interest，listen to the story about the places and have a taste of different local foods．On the other hand，traveling is very good to our health．While we are traveling，we can breathe fresh air or exercise our bodies as well．Usually，people∧are often traveling are in good health．In a word，I sincerely hope everybody will grasp as much opportunities as possible to travel．
解析：
第一句：删除the．考查冠词．traveling在本句里是泛指旅游，所以删除the．
第二句：simply→simple．考查形容词和副词．和形容词 clear一起做表语用形容词simple．
第三句：surprising→surprised．考查形容词辨析．修饰主语I 用surprised表示"吃惊的"．
第四句：increase→increases．考查主谓一致关系．动名词traveling主语做主语时，谓语动词用第三人称单数．
第五句：travel→traveling．考查非谓语动词．做介词by的宾语用doing．
story→stories．考查名词复数．本句表示"听关于这个地方的故事"，所以故事肯定不止一个，因此用可数名词story的复数．
第六句：to→for．考查介词．表示"对…有好处"用 be good for．
第七句：or→and．考查连词． breathe fresh air 和 exercise our bodies 是并列关系，所以用 and连接．
第八句：在people后添加who/that （注：删除people后面的are在语法上亦可接受）．考查定语从句．定语从句are often traveling代指先行词people，缺少主语，所以用who/that．
第九句：much→many．考查可数名词的修饰词．修饰可数名词复数opportunities用many．

点评 考查短文改错．
下列情况应免冠，代词限定名词前；
专有名词不可数，学科球类三餐饭；
复数名词表泛指，两节星期月份前；
颜色语种和国名，称呼习语及头衔．