Question

15．假如你是高中生李华，你的朋友李明在学校住宿，他写信告诉你他因不善于交友而苦恼．请你给他写一封回信并提出一些建议．
要点如下：
1 要善于乐于助人；
2 多与他人交流；
3 多参加学校活动．
注意：
1．词数：100左右；
2．要点齐全，书写工整．
3．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Li Ming，
                                                          

Answer 1

分析 本文是提纲类书信，假如你是高中生李华，你的朋友李明在学校住宿，他写信告诉你他因不善于交友而苦恼．请你给他写一封回信并提出一些建议．要点如下：1．要善于乐于助人；2．多与他人交流；3．多参加学校活动．写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系．根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩．注意：1．词数：100左右；2．要点齐全，书写工整．3．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
【亮点说明】语言简练，条理清晰，采用常见的三段形式．I'm sorry to hear that you're worrying about making friends．句中运用宾语从句；If you do so，you'll  make friends easily．条件状语从句使用得当；I do hope you will find these suggestions useful．强调谓语的运用使语气加强；另外，First，Second，Third，使文章显得层次分明；By doing these，communicate with，you'd better take an active part in，Therefore，Anyhow，这些单词、词组和句式的运用使文章显得生动、鲜活．

解答 Dear Li Ming，
     I'm sorry to hear that you're worrying about making friends．Some tips below may be helpful to you．（高分句型）
     First，you should be friendly to others and always ready to help others．If you do so，you'll  make friends easily．（善于助人）Second，you should try to communicate with others more．It is also very important and it will make your friends understand you better．（多与他人交流）Third，you'd better take an active part in activities of your school，such as sports，games，travels，parties，etc．By doing these，you'll get more chances to communicate with other people．（高分句型）Therefore，you'll have more chances to make new friends．（多参加活动）
     I do hope you will find these suggestions useful．（高分句型）Anyhow，there're many ways to develop a good friendship．Hope you'll solve this problem and get along well with your friends．（提出希望）
     Best wishes．                                                                                                                                                                              
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 提纲类写作的文章较开放式的文体，比较好写．学生在写作的过程中，首先思路要清晰，要对所表达的句子通顺的说出来，遇到不会的要学会替换所用语，来达到同样的意思．在每一篇作文中，对于表达观点的句子，都要用上起承转合的连词来加强文章的层次感，适当运用俗语，运用平时常用的句式来使文章富有变化，表达地道得体．