Question

你堂兄建华在国外学习，你们经常用英文通信。他即将完成学业，不久前来信就是否回国工作征求你的意见。请根据下列提示回信：

建议他回国；

你的理由是：⑴ 学有所用，就业容易；

               ⑵ 照顾父母。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.行文应连贯，内容应完整；

      3. 开头语与结尾已为你写好，不计入词数。

June 8th

Dear Jianhua,

I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago.

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Best wishes,

                                      Yours,

                                      Minghua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Jianhua,

I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago. I’ve been thinking about the question you asked me. In my opinion, you should come back after you finish your studies abroad. For one reason, what you are studying is badly needed nowadays in China. It will be quite easy for you to find a good job. In fact, I know a few big companies in our city are hoping to hire people like you. For another reason, I think it will be much more convenient for you to look after your parents as they are getting old. Therefore, I think it’s a good idea for you to return. So what are you waiting for?

Best wishes,

Minghua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇书信类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。要点和信的开头结尾已经给出.我们所要做的就是用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较简略,故需要自由发挥的地方较多.需要注意不要偏离文章中心.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头结尾,不能出现文章脱节问题.尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【亮点说明】范文要点全面，语言简洁但也不乏好的词组和句型：In my opinion,在我看来，hope to希望做…， I’ve been thinking about the question you asked me. 这句话用了定语从句， what you are studying is badly needed nowadays in China. 这句话用了主语从句，It will be quite easy for you to find a good job. 这句话用了it做形式主语， I think it will be much more convenient for you to look after your parents as they are getting old. 这句话用了it做形式主语和as引导的原因状语从句，Therefore, I think it’s a good idea for you to return. 这句话也是用it做形式主语。还有范文还使用了For one reason,  For another reason,这样的关联词，使文章更加连贯。

考点：书信类作文