Question

6．请你根据下面图画写一篇短文，描述其图画内容并简要谈谈你的看法．
注意：词数不超过60．

Answer 1

分析 本篇看图写作描述了家长开警车送孩子新生报到，让人联想到家长给孩子过多的保护．因此考生应从深层次的含义入手，可以使用举例，或者逻辑分析的方法来丰富作文的内容．注意使用一般现在时，以及恰当的连接词．
重要短语：
 do harm to，对…有害，a good case in point，一个恰当的例子，in summary，总之
高分句子：
As far as I am concerned，it is necessary that parents should give their children more space and freedom so that their children may become more independent．本句含有重要句型，it is necessary that，..是必要的

解答 The picture is so ironic that parents even drive the poice car to accompany their children to college．I don't think it's necessary for parents to accompany their children to college．（描述图片）
Nowadays many parents have a common sense that their children are so precious to them so they always try their best to give their children a happy and meaningful life．On one hand，these parents care and protect their children，however，on the other hand they may do harm to their children．（引出现象）
     As far as I am concerned，it is necessary that parents should give their children more space and freedom so that their children may become more independent．（高分句型）What's more，it is also a good way to let their children study in a boarding school for children must face something by their own，such as，their relationship with friends and student，their study and busy life and so on．A good case in point，parents may encourage their children to take part-time jobs during summer or winter holiday．By doing this，I believe，these children may become more independent，brave and responsible．（提出建议）
     In summary，spoiling children is no right．Parents should know better that an independent，responsible and brave person is able to adapt society better．（总结）

点评 要想使自己的书面表达得高分，首先要做到扬长避短．"扬长"就是发挥自身的优势，使用熟练掌握的句型，"避短"就是避开自己的弱点，尽量做到不犯错误或少犯错误，这是读写任务得分的关键所在．