分析 本文主要讲述作者和父母在国庆节去北京旅游的故事.
解答 I like travelling and my dream of visit Beijing,the capital city of our country,come true during the National Day holidays this year.In October 1st,I went to Tian'anmen Square with my parents,there we watched the flag-raising ceremony.As I watched∧flag rising slowly,I sang the national anthem,feeling extremely exciting.Then we went to some other famous tourist attraction,like the Great Wall.Standing on the Great Wall,I felt very proudly.I thought of the old saying that"One who fail to reach the Great Wall is not a hero."Although I was tired,but I really had a good time.
详解:
1.visit改为visiting 考查动名词.of是介词,后接动词时用动名词形式.
2.come 改为came 考查动词时态.全文讲述的是已发生的事情,用一般过去时态.
3.In改为On 考查介词.October 1st表示特定的一天,用介词on.
4.there改为where 考查定语从句.分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句,先行词Tian'anmen Square表示地点,在从句中作状语,用关系副词where.
5.flag前面加上the 考查冠词.此处特指天安门广场的升旗仪式,用定冠词the.
6.exciting改为excited 考查过去分词. 过去分词作表语,多半用来表示人物所处的心理状态或情感变化,其主语多半是人.
7.attraction改为attractions 考查名词.tourist attraction意为"旅游景点",是可数名词.又根据前面的some可知此处应用复数形式.
8.proudly改为proud 考查形容词.feel是连系动词,后接形容词作表语.副词proudly的形容词是proud.
9.fail改为fails 考查主谓一致.在定语从句中,从句的谓语动词在数上与先行词一致,此处先行词one是单数形式,谓语动词也应用单数三人称形式fails.
10.去掉but,或but改为yet 考查连词.在英语中,两个句子只需要一个连词,though引导让步状语从句不可与but连用,but是多余的,要去掉.或将but改为副词yet.
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