Question

假如你是李华, 你的美国笔友John想了解你进入高中后的英语课外阅读情况。请你根据下面提示, 给他回一封电子邮件。

 

阅读现状	以英文报纸为主； 偶尔简单的故事书……；几乎没有经典类的英语读物
原因分析	1. 阅读时间少； 2. 没有养成阅读英语的习惯； 3. 词汇量小, 认为经典类太难, 没有尝试或不感兴趣……
未来打算	……

注意：1. 根据所给提示, 适当发挥, 要求内容充实, 语意连贯。

2. 词数120-150。开头和结尾已经写好, 不计入总词数。

3. 参考词汇：

英语课外阅读 English extracurricular reading;

经典英语读物classic English books.

 

Dear John,

Thank you for your email. Now I would like to tell you something about my English reading in senior high school.

 

 

 

 

 

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

One possible version:

Dear John,

Thank you for your email. Now I would like to tell you something about my English extracurricular reading in senior high school. Usually I am only asked to read some newspapers. Sometimes I just read some simple English stories or magazines to relax myself. But I have never read classic English books.

Do you know why？The reasons are as follows. First, since entering senior high school, I have been burdened with so much homework that my reading time is very limited. Besides, I haven’t formed a habit of reading English. Lastly, the number of the English words I have mastered is less than 3000. I think the classic English books are too difficult to understand and so I even haven’t had a try.

However, reading is important for our English learning. It can not only enlarge our English vocabulary but show us a colorful world. Especially it helps us to think better in English and learn English better. So I decide to read English widely, ranging from simple English stories to classic English books.

【解析】

试题分析：本次作文属于提纲类作文。其题材为书信，但其格式题目已该出，所以只需考虑其内容。文章的结构大体要分为三部分1.进入高中后的英语课外阅读情况；2.原因；3.打算。注意要内容表达要主次得当、条理清晰。另外，因为文章主要写的是现在的情况，故基本时态应定为：一般现在时。

【亮点说明】

范文采用“三段式”，全面地表达了要点，结构清晰、重点突出。在重点的主体段表达原因时，First,

Besides，Lastly的准确使用使文章条理清楚、逻辑性强。难能可贵的是文章使用了“as follows”，“have been burdened with”，“ the number of …is limited”,“too difficult to understand ”，“reading is important for…”，“not only enlarge … but show …”，“…, ranging from simple English stories to classic English books”，大量短语、固定句式和多变的句式彰显了该生扎实的基本功和较高的语言应用能力，为文章增色不少，自然会增加不少得分点。