Question

14．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的美国笔友Chris在给你的邮件中提到他最近在准备SAT考试（美国高考），心理压力很大，很苦恼，希望得到你的帮助．请你给他回信，内容包括：
1．安慰对方；
2．分析心理压力过大可能导致的后果；
3．给出相应的建议及其理由．
注意：1．词数100左右；
           2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Chris，
I'm sorry to learn that you've been under a lot of pressure lately due to the upcoming SAT test．Anyone in your situation would suffer a certain amount of stress．But don't worry too much，or you may find yourself having problems with sleep，appetite，or even memory．Here are some ways I think that can deal with stress．
The first thing you can try is to exercise．Exercises like walking or running not only boost energy but also build up your confidence．Another way is to enjoy some games with friends，which can take your mind off the stress and make you more relaxed．It might also be a good idea to talk to someone who is a good listener； having someone to listen to your problems can make you feel better．
I believe it will all work out．Cheer up!Let me know if I can help further．
Yours，
Li Hua

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
But don't worry too much，or you may find yourself having problems with sleep，appetite，or even memory
但不要担心太多，否则你会发现自己有睡眠、食欲甚至记忆问题，．
高分句型二：
It might also be a good idea to talk to someone who is a good listener； having someone to listen to your problems can make you feel better．
与一个好的听众的人说话是一个好主意；有人听你的问题会让你感觉更好．

解答 Possible version
Dear Chris，
I'm sorry to learn that you've been under a lot of pressure lately due to the upcoming SAT test．Anyone in your situation would suffer a certain amount of stress．But don't worry too much，or you may find yourself having problems with sleep，appetite，or even memory（高分句型一）．Here are some ways I think that can deal with stress．
The first thing you can try is to exercise．Exercises like walking or running not only boost energy but also build up your confidence．Another way is to enjoy some games with friends，which can take your mind off the stress and make you more relaxed．It might also be a good idea to talk to someone who is a good listener； having someone to listen to your problems can make you feel better（高分句型二）．
I believe it will all work out．Cheer up!Let me know if I can help further．
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．