Question

7．你们班同学打算周六去爬香山．请给外教Chris写一封英文信，邀请他参加此次活动．具体内容如下：
1．时间：8am-5pm；
2．集合地点：校门口；
3．交通工具：公交车；
4．携带物品：雨具，午餐，相机．
注意：1．词数不少于50；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Chris，
             
Yours，
Joe．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
To make it a green travel，we will take the bus there．为了能有一个绿色环保的旅行，我们会乘坐汽车前往．
高分句型二：
And don't forget to take some food，because we plan to have lunch on the top of the hill．
不要忘记带一些食物，因为我们计划在山顶上野餐．
句型一 To make it a green travel，该句使用了不定式位于句首作目的状语，表明目的
句型二 ①don't forget to take some food 该句是一个祈使句，此处是祈使句的否定，在动词前面加don't
            ②because we plan to have lunch on the top of the hill 该句是一个because 引导的原因状语从句，起到解释说明的作用

解答 Dear Chris，
   We are planning to climb the Xiangshan Hill this Saturday and sincerely invite you to go with us．（提出邀请）
   We will get together at the school gate at 8 am and probably come back at 5 pm．To make it a green travel，we will take the bus there．（高分句型一）You'd better take your camera to record the beautiful scenery．And don't forget to take some food，because we plan to have lunch on the top of the hill．（高分句型二）Remember，take your umbrella or raincoat in case it rains． 
    If you can join us，we will be very happy．
   Yours，
   Joe

点评 该书面表达为提纲类，该类作文规定了考生的写作思路，考生应根据所给的要点再相应的结合实际将文章阐述清楚，尽量做到语言使用准确，用词简洁明了．