Question

假设你是李华，一个英国学生社团下周将到你就读的启明中学进行为期一天的参观访问，你负责接待工作。请根据下面的提示给对方的负责人Mr.Steven 写一封邮件，商讨参观事宜。

1．自我介绍；

2．参观安排；上午参观校园；中午食堂用餐；下午交流活动；晚上举办欢迎晚会；

3．征询对方的其它要求。

注意：1．词数：120—l50，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Mr．Steven，

I’m Li Hua，a student from Qiming Secondary School．

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Dear Mr. Jones,

I’m Li Hua, a student from Qiming Secondary School. I’m in charge of your visit to our school next week and I’m writing to exchange ideas about the arrangements for you.

You’ll be picked up at the airport and after a short rest, we’ll show you around our campus, which will allow you to get a general impression of our school. Then you’re supposed to visit our teaching buildings, the school stadium and the dormitories as well. After that, we will have lunch together in the school canteen. In the afternoon, a free talk will be arranged, so we can talk about the school life and different cultures of the two countries. In the evening, there will be a welcome party for you.

If you have any other request, please inform me in time so that we can make some possible changes to the visiting schedule.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲类书面表达：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语in charge of负责；picked up接某人；show you around领某人参观；we’ll show you around our campus, which will allow you to get a general impression of our school.这个句子which引导非限制性定语从句；In the afternoon, a free talk will be arranged, so we can talk about the school life and different cultures of the two countries.这个句子so连接两个有因果关系的句子；

考点： 提纲类作文