Question

1．假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，为校刊"英语园地"写一篇短文，记述你和同学们在寒冷冬日清晨为环卫工人送"爱心粥"（hot porridge）的志愿活动．词数不少于60．

Answer 1

分析 本篇看图写作分四幅图画，要求考生介绍在冬日清晨为环卫工人送"爱心粥"的志愿活动．考生在写作的时候首先要观察四张图的内容，按照图片所标出的数字理解事情发展的先后顺序，以便自己能够抓住图片中所发生的事情和主要内容进行写作．同时还要注意的是在写作过程中所运用的时态要以一般过去时为主．除此以外，要注意写作过程中注意使用平时学到的短语和句型，注意行文的连贯和逻辑性．
重要短语：
 on one's way to…，在某人去…的路上，made up my mind to do，下定决心做，at the moment，在那时．
高分句子：
1．While I was walking on my way to school，I noticed two street cleaners sweeping the street in the fierce wind．本句中While引导时间状语从句，丰富句子结构．
2．After arriving at school，I discussed with some classmates what we could do．本句中含what引导的宾语从句．

解答 It was extremely cold last Monday morning．While I was walking on my way to school，I noticed two street cleaners sweeping the street in the fierce wind．（高分句型）Seeing them working so hard on such a cold morning，I was moved and made up my mind to do something for them．（介绍事件起因）
    After arriving at school，I discussed with some classmates what we could do．（高分句型）Some suggested helping with the cleaning while others advised getting some hot porridge to keep them warm．Finally we all agreed on the latter．
    The next day，we got up early and prepared porridge at home．When we handed the cleaners the hot porridge and expressed our appreciation for their hard work，they looked a little surprised at first．And then they took the porridge and thanked us happily．Though it seemed cold still，we all felt warm at the moment．（叙述结果）

点评 图画作文就是根据给出的一幅或几幅图画所提供的信息写短文．写好看图作文要注意以下几个方面：1）看图作文通常有一定得提示，所以在动笔前一定要通读提示，弄懂写作要求，如时间、地点、人物、事件发生地的先后顺序等． 2）图画是作文的依据，要仔细观察分析图画的画面，弄清画面所反映的真实内涵或蕴含的某种哲理． 3）找出图中事物之间的内在联系．如果多幅图画，就要分析画与画之间的内在联系及画中人物、事物之间的逻辑联系．要根据画面情景展开联想． 4）反复阅读所给的关键词，并以此为线索从中悟出试题设计者要阐述的中心思想．