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6．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）画掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
         2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Our government is built a"harmonious society（和谐社会）"．It is our duty to work hard to achieve this goals．First of all，we should love our motherland，caring about the development of our hometowns and take an active part our school's activities．Secondly，we should respect the old and love the young，included our parents and teachers．We should also unite the student around us and help each other．Above all，we must be honestly and reliable in our daily life．Last but not least，we should try our best to saving energy and protect against our natural environment．Let's start right now and spares no effort to do a little bit every day!

Answer 1

分析 作者在本文讲述了怎样去建立一个和谐社会．首先要热爱祖国，关系家乡的发展；其次要尊老爱幼，团结同学；第三要诚实守信；最后还有节约能源，保护环境．

解答 Our government is built a"harmonious society（和谐社会）"．It is our duty to work hard to achieve this goals．First of all，we should love our motherland，caring about the development of our hometowns and take an active part∧our school's activities．Secondly，we should respect the old and love the young，included our parents and teachers．We should also unite the student around us and help each other．Above all，we must be honestly and reliable in our daily life．Last but not least，we should try our best to saving energy and protect against our natural environment．Let's start right now and spares no effort to do a little bit every day!
详解：
1．built改为building；考查动词的时态和语态，用building与is构成现在进行时，句意为"我们的国家正在建设一个和谐社会"．
2．goals改为goal；考查名词，前面有this修饰，名词要用单数形式．
3．caring改为care；考查动词，这里care与前面的love和后面的take是并列成分，形式要保持一致．
4．part后面加in；考查固定搭配，take part in 是固定短语，意为‘参加'．
5．included改为including；考查形近词辨析，included用作形容词，用在名词或代词后，意思是"包括在内"． including用作介词，意思是"包括在内"，根据句意可知此处要用including．
6．student改为students；考查名词单复数，根据句意"我们应该团结周围的同学"可知要用复数形式．
7．honestly改为honest；考查形容词，此处用形容词作be的表语，构成系表结构．
8．saving改为save；考查动词，不定式to后面要跟动词原形，try one's best to do 意为"尽某人最大的努力做某事"．
9．去掉against；考查介词，此处句意为"保护我们的自然环境"，protect是及物动词，可以直接加宾语，protect against意为"保护…使免受…"．
10．spares改为spare；考查并列结构，此处spare与start是并列成分，用于Let's之后，要用动词原形．

点评 短文改错首先快速阅读短文，了解短文基本大意，确定文章的基本时态，再运用语法，词汇，习惯性短语等基础知识进一步分析各个句子，找出文中的错误加以修改．