Question

15．假如你是李华，就读于一所国际学校，前段时间你作为中国中学生代表团的一员，参加了世界聋人联合会组织的志愿服务活动，并从中学到了许多东西，请你根据以下提示，用英文向该组织写一封感谢信．
内容包括：1．与生活在国际聋人之家的聋人朋友们相处一周；
2．通过演讲等方式告诉人们呵护聋人；
你从中学到的东西：1．了解了聋人的生活方式；
2．学会了简单的手语（sign language），能与他们交流沟通；
3．用实际行动去爱护身边的残疾人．
注意：1．可参照所给提示，作必要的想象
2．词数100左右；信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Sir or Madam，
My name is Li Hua，and I'm from China，I am writing to thank you forgiving me a chance to learn about deaf people．
Last month，as a representative of Chinese middle-school students，I took part in volunteer activities you organized．I lived with deaf people in the International Home for the Deaf for a week．It was the first time that I had been in such close contact with deaf people．We participated in other activities as well，such as giving speeches to tell people to care for deaf people．
Though it was a short time，I learned a lot．I learned about how they live and what they do in their spare time，as well as how they communicate and express themselves．I myself can now use some simple sign language，and I've realized that I'm very lucky to be able to make their lives easier and let them know we care about them．Without you，I would not have known all about this．I promise I will do my part to continue helping them．
Your sincerely．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
We participated in other activities as well，such as giving speeches to tell people to care for deaf people
们参加其他的活动，比如给演讲告诉人们关爱聋哑人．
高分句型二：
I learned about how they live and what they do in their spare time，as well as how they communicate and express themselves．
我学会了他们如何生活以及他们在业余时间做什么，以及他们如何沟通和表达自己．

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
  My name is Li Hua，and I'm from China．I am writing to thank you for giving me a chance to learn about deaf people．
  Last month，as a representative of Chinese middle-school students，I took part in volunteer activities you organized．I lived with deaf people in the International Home for the Deaf for a week．It was the first time that I had been in such close contact with deaf people．We participated in other activities as well，such as giving speeches to tell people to care for deaf people（高分句型一）．
  Though it was a short time，I learned a lot．I learned about how they live and what they do in their spare time，as well as how they communicate and express themselves（高分句型二）．I myself can now use some simple sign language，and I've realized that I'm very lucky to be able to make their lives easier and let them know we care about them．Without you，I would not have known all about this．I promise I will do my part to continue helping them．
                                                              Your sincerely，
Li Hua

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．