Question

假定你是李华，中国青年志愿者网（China Youth Volunteers/CYV）计划在6月30日前向全国各大院校及社会各界招募1000名志愿者，进行急救知识普及活动。你想申请成为其中一员。请用英语写一封自我推荐信。要点如下：

1. 个人情况：年龄：18； 性别：男； 出身医学世家。

个人优势：掌握基本急救知识，有救援经验，身体素质好。

目的：帮助有需要的人；回报社会。

注意：可以适当增加细节使文章连贯。词数：100左右。

Dear Sir/Madam,

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Yours truly,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

Dear Sir/Madam:

My name is Li Hua, a boy at the age of 18. I feel honored to write to you and promote myself as a volunteer of CYV to get across the common sense of first aid.

Firstly, I have a good knowledge of first aid because my parents are both doctors. What’s more, it is the abundant experience in saving lives and attending to the wounded that guarantees me to be of help, when it comes to tough situations. Last but not the least, I am in good condition, due to the constant exercises and body building.

On the whole, I am qualified to be a volunteer. I hope to help out people in need and reward our society as soon as possible. Looking forwards to your earliest reply.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇自我推荐信类作文。假定你是李华，中国青年志愿者网（China Youth Volunteers/CYV）计划在6月30日前向全国各大院校及社会各界招募1000名志愿者，进行急救知识普及活动。你想申请成为其中一员。要点如下1. 个人情况：2.个人优势：3.目的：帮助有需要的人；回报社会。

需要写的内容已经粗略给出，需要我们翻译成完整通顺的句子，适当添加些内容，使文章更充实。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。一定要给出自己的看法。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。注意要求的词数120词左右，不要太多也不要太少。

【亮点说明】it is the abundant experience in saving lives and attending to the wounded that guarantees me to be of help,这里含有一个强调句。

考点：自我推荐信类书面表达