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13．中秋节（农历八月十五）是中国的一个很重要的节日，是仅次于春节的第二大传统节日．在这一天家人团聚，共赏圆月．假设你是李华，请你给外籍笔友John写一封信，给他介绍这一节日以及节日庆祝活动．内容要点如下：
1．中秋节是中国的传统节日之一，一般在九月或十月过中秋节．
2．中秋节这天家人团聚，吃月饼．月饼种类繁多，美味可口，形状是圆的，像月亮．
3．中秋之夜，人们常常在室外边吃月饼边赏月．
注意：1．词数100左右，短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
参考词汇：the MidAutumn Day 中秋节；traditional Chinese festival 中国的传统节日；shape 形状；mooncake 月饼；round 圆的；appreciate 欣赏
Dear John，
The MidAutumn Day is                ．
I'm looking forward to your letter．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇介绍中秋节的作文．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一点明主题；二介绍节日庆祝活动；三总结上文提出盼望．
高分句型：
1．The MidAutumn Day is one of the important traditional Chinese festivals that falls on a certain day in September or October句子里that引导定语从句，代指先行词one of the important traditional Chinese festivals．
中秋节是中国的传统节日之一，一般在九月或十月过中秋节．
2．Moreover，on the evening of the MidAutumn Day，people get together outdoors，eating delicious mooncakes while appreciating the beautiful moon hanging in the sky．句子里on the evening of the MidAutumn Day是时间状语；eating delicious mooncakes while appreciating the beautiful moon hanging in the sky．做伴随状语．
此外，中秋之夜，人们常常聚集在室外边吃月饼边赏月．

解答 Dear John，
The MidAutumn Day is one of the important traditional Chinese festivals that falls on a certain day in September or October．【高分句型一】（点明主题）During the day，family members get together and have mooncakes together．There are many kinds of mooncakes．The shape of a mooncake is round as it symbolizes a big moon．Moreover，on the evening of the MidAutumn Day，people get together outdoors，eating delicious mooncakes while appreciating the beautiful moon hanging in the sky．【高分句型二】On that evening，the moon looks brighter and rounder．We call this moon the full moon．（介绍节日庆祝活动）
In a word，the MidAutumn Day is a very important festival for Chinese people and I love it very much．
I'm looking forward to your letter．（总结上文提出盼望）
                                                                                                                                               Yours，
                                                            Li Hua

点评 考查提纲类作文．
V-ing可以做时间状语，条件状语，让步状语，原因状语，结果状语，方式状语，伴随状语．
时间状语 Walking on the street，I saw an old friend．---When I walked on the street
条件状语 Breaking the law，you will be punished．---If you break the law
让步状语 Having been refused for many times，he didn't give up．---Although he had been refused for many times
原因状语 Being ill，he did not go to school．---Because he was ill
结果状语 He was seriously ill，not being able to go to school．---so he was not able to go to school
方式状语 He passed the exam finally using a cheating tool．---起到by作用
伴随状语 He is on his way home listening to music．-----起到with作用