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短文写作（25分）
中央号召创建节约型社会，可是许多校园内部浪费现象严重。请你在班会课上发表演讲，号召同学们从我做起，杜绝浪费。
提示：浪费现象：水、电；餐厅的食物；其他。
危害：自身性格；父母财政负担；自然资源。
制止浪费现象的措施：由自己设想
注意：1．词数130左右；演讲的开头和结尾已写好，不记人总词数。
2．不要逐字逐条翻译，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。

Answer 1

When I first learned to write in English，I run into many difficulties.The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese but tried to translate everything into Chinese.My teacher advised me to keep diaries.I followed her advices.Happily it worked.Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English.One day I wrote a short story and showed it my teacher.She liked it very much that she read it to the class.Everyone said the story was the good one.I was great encouraged by their words.

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