Question

5．假定你是李华．学校将在暑假期间组织到泰山进行研学旅行（educational excursion）．请给你校国际班的Peter写封邮件．内容包括：1．活动时间、目的地；
2．活动目的；
3．邀请他参加．
注意：1．词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Peter，
Our school is planning an educational excursion to Mount Tai from August 6 to August 10 during this summer vacation．I can't wait to invite you to take part in it．
As we know，we students are spending most of our time on the campus．As a result，we are almost cut off from the outside world．Hopefully，the excursion will provide us a good chance to get closer to nature，which will definitely contribute to our physical and mental health．What's more，the excursion will surely broaden our horizons by experiencing the local cultures．
I believe the excursion will be both exciting and rewarding．And we're eagerly expecting your coming．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一封邀请信．个题目要求可知用第一人称和一般将来时．内容包括：一说明活动的时间，地点，并且发出邀请；二活动的目的；三对活动的信心并且再次邀请．
高分句型：
1．Hopefully，the excursion will provide us a good chance to get closer to nature，which will definitely contribute to our physical and mental health．句子里provide表示"提供"；get closer to 表示"更贴近"；which 引导非限制性定语从句，代指主句； contribute to 表示"有助于"．
我希望这次研学旅行能够为我们提供一个更贴近大自然的机会，这肯定会有助于我们的身心健康．
2．What's more，the excursion will surely broaden our horizons by experiencing the local cultures．句子里What's more表示"此外"； broaden our horizons 表示"开拓我们的视野"；experiencing the local cultures是现在分词做状语，表示体验当地的文化．
此外，通过体验当地的文化，这次研学旅行能够开拓我们的视野．

解答 Dear Peter，
   Our school is planning an educational excursion to Mount Tai from August 6 to August 10 during this summer vacation．I can't wait to invite you to take part in it．（说明活动的时间，地点，并且发出邀请）
    As we know，we students are spending most of our time on the campus．As a result，we are almost cut off from the outside world．Hopefully，the excursion will provide us a good chance to get closer to nature，which will definitely contribute to our physical and mental health．【高分句型一】What's more，the excursion will surely broaden our horizons by experiencing the local cultures．【高分句型二】（活动的目的）
    I believe the excursion will be both exciting and rewarding．And we're eagerly expecting your coming．（对活动的信心并且再次邀请）
                                                                                                                           Yours，
                                                                                                                             Li Hua

点评 考查提纲类作文．
提纲类写作是近年高考英语书面表达的热点题型，命题人 通常以提纲作文的形式考查书信、报道、通知、日记、发言稿、对某人或某物的介绍、欢迎词等．提纲作文的选材范围很广，内容简单易懂，且多是考生熟悉的话题．这类题型的主要特点 是要点明确，范围具体．但考生也容易受中文提纲的制约，将 书面表达变成了翻译，造成语法结构和词汇上的单调，甚至写 出结构不完整的句子．