Question

12．某英语网站的学习和交流栏目最近推出一个讨论话题"What kind of teacher do you like best？"邀请网友积极参与讨论．假如你是李华，你打算参加这个交流活动．请写一篇英语短文，描述你最喜欢哪种类型的老师，并陈述你的理由．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇开放式作文，写作时不仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文．需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．
First of all，he or she is always enthusiastic about teaching and love students．（高分句型一）首先，他或她总是对教学充满热情并且热爱学生．
Since students need motivation to learn，a good teacher should motivate students to keep on trying until they achieve their goals．（高分句型二）因为学生需要学习激励，一个好的老师应该激励学生不断努力直到实现目标．

解答 Many teachers have taught me since I started school．I'd like this kind of teacher best：First of all，he or she is always enthusiastic about teaching and love students．（高分句型一）Besides，he or she knows how to motivated students to work on their lessons．More importantly，he or she is willing to make friends with students．My reasons are as follows：
    In my opinion，if a teacher has no passion for teaching，his or her class is boring．A passionate teacher will always try to make his or her class interesting，so the students will learn happily in class．Since students need motivation to learn，a good teacher should motivate students to keep on trying until they achieve their goals．（高分句型二）In addition，we students may meet with problems from time to time，so we need someone to talk to．If our teacher is our friend，we can share our problems with him or her．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．