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假定你是李华，在一个英文网络论坛上， 你看到一个名叫Grown-up的中学生发帖（post）寻求帮助，请根据帖子的内容、写作要点和要求回帖。

Grown-up        Post at 20-9-2013  21:18                             1#
newable ☆	Hi, everyone,   I’m a Senior Grade Three student, and I am suffering from mental pressure these days, what should I do?                                          TOP
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写作要点：1．告诉Grown-up心理压力不可避免；

2．告诉Grown-up心里压力的危害；

3．建议Grown-up应正确面对心理压力；

4．介绍你面对心里压力时所采取的措施。（至少写两点措施）

注意：1．词数100左右。   2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3．文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Hi, Grown-up,

It’s a fact that we face more and more mental pressure in our life.

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Hope my ideas will work.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Hi, Grown-up,

It’s a fact that we face more and more mental pressure in our life. In my opinion, everyone will meet some mental pressure in their life, so don’t worry. But if it lasts a long time, it may do harm to our body.

Whenever I meet pressure, I try to keep calm and think how to overcome it. Sometimes it is very effective. When I’m stressed out, I listen to music or do some sports. After that, I often find that my moods become much better. If I can’t overcome it by myself, I will turn to my parents, teachers or good friends.

To sum up, we should face pressure bravely and overcome it actively.

Hope my ideas will work.

【解析】

试题分析：考察提纲类作文。本文的话题是如何正确面对心理压力，告诉对方心理压力是很正常的现象。对人的身心健康也有很大的影响，一定要引起重视，而且要积极地面对它。在采取措施方面要注意劳逸结合，多和家人朋友交流，缓解各种不适情况。写作时需要使用平时积累的层次关系的短语，多使用被动，倒装、虚拟来提升作文的美度。在平时写作时应该多进行阅读，对阅读过程中写的好的表达要进行积累，并且学以致用，勤积累，多背诵，这样才能作文才能稳步的提升。

【亮点说明】：在范文中运用了较多的连接词，如To sum up等；也有高级的句式：whenever I meet pressure。这个让步状语从句。高级词汇如overcome, do harm to…等等。考生在以后的写作过程中也要注意文章的润色。

考点：考察提纲作文