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18.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧,并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
This afternoon,we hold a class meeting to say goodbye to Zhang Qiang,who was going to study in abroad.In the beginning,he made a briefly speech to express his true love for the class and his wish for everlasting friendship with us.We were all moved to tear.Then came the moment to present him with a special gift,a heart-shaped board with some photos recorded the unforgettable days when we had spent together.Afterwards,we signed out names on his T-shirt expressing his best wishes.
At last,we had a photo taking to record this precious moment.True friendship won't be weakening by distance.We'll surely miss him and we all wish good luck in the future.

分析 文章讲述了一次送别同学的班会.一位名叫张强的同学要出国,同学们纷纷和他道别.他回忆了和同学们中一起的时光,表达了和同学之间的友谊.同学们都感动得流泪.同学们送了他一份特殊的礼物,一张贴着记录他们中一起度过的时光的照片的板.他们还在T恤上签名祝福.真正的友谊不会因为距离而变淡.

解答 This afternoon,we hold a class meeting to say goodbye to Zhang Qiang,
                             held
who was going to study in abroad.In the beginning,he made a briefly speech
                                 去掉                                                     brief 
to express his true love for the class and his wish for everlasting friendship with us.

We were all moved to tear.Then came the moment to present him with a special gift,
                                tears
a heart-shaped board with some photos recorded the unforgettable days when we had spent together.
                                                         recording                                 that/which
Afterwards,we signed out names on his T-shirt expressing his best wishes.
                                                                                      our
At last,we had a photo taking to record this precious moment.
                                    taken
True friendship won't be weakening by distance.We'll surely miss him and we all wish∧good luck in the future.
                                    weakened                                                                            加him
1.hold改为held.文章讲述的是过去的事,要用一般过去时态.   
2.去掉in.abroad是副词,作study的状语,不需要介词.       
3.briefly改为brief.句中speech是名词,要用形容词修饰.  
4.tear改为tears.短语搭配,be moved to tears感动得流泪.   
5.recorded改为recording.题干中record后接宾语the unforgettable days,要用表示主动的现在分词作后置定语.   
6.when改为that/which.题干中we had spent together是修饰days的定语从句,从句中spent缺少宾语,要用关系代词.
7.his改为our.题干中是指代前面的we,要用对应的物主代词our.      
8.taking改为taken.题干中take与photo构成动宾关系,要用被动的过去分词,构成have sth done结构.        
9.weakening改为weakened.题干中weaken与friendship是动宾关系,是被动语态.  
80.加him.短语搭配,wish sb good luck祝愿某人好运.

点评 短文改错题考查的是语境理解能力和用法基础知识.常考的知识点有:名词(单复数错误),动词(时态,语态,搭配,转换),代词(指代错误),形容词和副词(转换,比较等级),连词(and,but,or)等.偶尔也会考查逻辑错误,如本来用her,却用了his等等.解题是要注意:以句子为单位,以动词为中心.看句子要看完整,避免句子前后矛盾的错误;找错误要以动词为主,动词或与动词有关的错误占了改错的题的重要一部分.

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