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2.英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/\),并在该句下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:
(1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
(2)只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.
One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake.We took ours fishing poles and headed
for the lake.As soon as we arrived,so we dropped the lines into the water.Before waiting
for about half an hour,I was beginning to get impatiently.I wanted to give up,and my
grandfather told me to wait a little longer.Finally,there were a sudden pull at the pole
and fish was caught.Within the next few minute,my grandfather also caught a fish.
Felt hungry,we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish.It was delicious.

分析 文章大意:我和爷爷喜欢钓鱼.一个周日早晨我们到一个湖边钓鱼.在钓鱼的过程中我显得没有耐心,我想放弃,但爷爷叫我再等等,终于,我钓到一条鱼,随后爷爷也钓了一条鱼.

解答 My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.

One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake.We took ours fishing poles and headed
                                    went                                     our
for the lake.As soon as we arrived,so we dropped the lines into the water.Before waiting
                                                        去掉                                                    After
for about half an hour,I was beginning to get impatiently.I wanted to give up,and my
                                                                    impatient                                       but
grandfather told me to wait a little longer.Finally,there were a sudden pull at the pole
                                                                                      was
and∧fish was caught.Within the next few minute,my grandfather also caught a fish.
                                                                  minutes
Felt hungry,we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish.It was delicious.
Feeling
76.go-went      考查时态.根据文意周日早晨钓鱼是发生过的事情所以应该用一般过去时.
77.ours-our     考查名词性物主代词和形容词性物主代词的用法.名词性物主代词ours 不能再与名词连用,而后面的fishing poles是名词,修饰名词与名词连用用形容词性物主代词our.              
78.去掉we前面的so   考查从属连词. 上文有as soon as 引导从句,则后一句话为主句不用引导词.连词多用.
79.before--after       考查介词.介词 before和after错误.根据句意应该是等了大约半小时之后而不是之前.
80.impatiently-impatient  考查副词与形容词区别.系表结构的表语一般用形容词而不能用副词做表语.get为系动词后面要用形容词 impatient做表语.  
81.and-but              考查并列连词. 上句话是想放弃与下文的爷爷让我再等等之间是转折关系而不是顺接,所以and改成but.
82.were-was           考查主谓一致.There be  句型是就近一致原则,离be动词近的是a sudden poll 为单数,所以be动词用 was 而不用were.        
83.fish前加a          考查冠词.这里的fish是一条鱼是可数名词,可数名词单数前要加冠词a.fish 单复数同形,但是可数名词需加冠词.下文的"caught a fish"有提示.              
84.minute-minutes 考查名词单复数.根据句意接下来的几分钟,minute是可数名词好几分钟要用复数形式.
85.felt-feeling       考查非谓语动词.非谓语动词feel的逻辑主语是we(我们)是主动感觉,所以非谓语用现在分词feeling表示主动含义.根据句意应该是等了大约半小时之后而不是之前.

点评 本篇短文改错考查涉及冠词,非谓语动词,主谓一致,名词单复数,时态等,平时注重多积累,答题时结合句意和语法进行分析,答完后通读,是否通顺,符合逻辑.

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