Question

在日常学习、工作和生活中，学会与人合作非常重要。为此，你班贴出了一张通知。 请根据通知、写作要点和要求写一篇英语演讲稿。

Notice Our monitor suggests that we hold an English Speech on January 25th. Everyone is invited to attend the speech. Those who will attend it, please get ready for your speech before it. The topic of the speech is “Being a good partner”. January 10th, 2014

写作要点：
与人合作的重要性。
怎样成为一个好的合作伙伴 （2-3条建议）。
你理想的合作伙伴是怎样的。
写作要求：
短文填写在答题卡的指定区域。
短文词数不少于100(不含已写好的部分)。
内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。
书写须清楚、工整。

Answer 1

Good afternoon , everyone!
The topic of my speech today is “being a good partner”. Cooperation is  a good way for us to learn from each other as well as to save us a lot of  time and energy . Thus we can complete our work successful and efficiently.
How can we become a good partner? My suggestion are as follows. Firstly, we should try to listen to others’ opinions and never force your ideas on others. Secondly, no one in the world is perfect. Let’s learn to put up with their shortcomings and discover their advantages , which will surely encourage each other to do the best.
As far as I’m concerned, when I am lucky enough to find someone who is easy-going and warm-hearted to cooperate with, it will make us feel very happy.On the other hand, However, a person who is hard- working and strong-minded will have a good effect on me. Hope you are a good partner for me.
That’s all, Thank you!

试题分析：试题贴近考生实际生活，给出的要点比较简略，主要围绕为何合作，与谁合作，怎样合作三部分展开，其中“怎样成为好的合作伙伴”要求给出自己的观点，属于半开放性话题,故需要自由发挥的地方较多.需要注意不要偏离文章中心.在写作时注意把握好以下几点：(1)书写规范，卷面整洁。(2)行文紧凑，过渡自然。(3)要点完整，表达清楚。(4)语法正确，时态准确。(5)用词无误，控制得当(100词之间)。(6)认真复查，胸有成竹。尤其是“怎样成为好的合作伙伴”部分要求给出自己的观点，要注意不要偏离文章中心
【亮点说明】(1)使用一些如Firstly,secondly,however等承接词进行连接,层次清晰。(2)多变的高级句式如非限制性定语从句的使用，Let’s learn to put up with their shortcomings and discover their advantages , which will surely encourage each other to do the best.另外，设问句的运用How can we become a good partner?使文章衔接更自然。还有词组：as follows “如下”，put up with“容忍”，As far as I’m concerned“据我所知”等。