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3．学生会正在评选新一届学生会主席，假设你是该校的学生李青，有意参加竞选．写一份自荐材料，材料必须包括以下内容：
简述个人信息及你所具备的竞选条件（能力、性格、爱好等）．
如果当选，请你用具体事例阐述你将会为本校学生做些什么？
注意：自荐材料中不得使用你所在学校和你的真实名字．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，写一份自荐材料，参加学校新一届学生会主席的竞选．
写作时人称以第一人称为主，时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主．
写作要点：1．简述个人信息和具备的竞选条件； 2．具体阐述将会为本校学生做些什么．
重要短语：learn sth about…（了解关于某事），the extracurricular reading（课外阅读），frankly speaking （ 坦诚地说），first of all （首先），be burdened with（负重担…），form a habit of（形成做某事的习惯），take up （从事），limit sth （现在某事…），the amount of…（…的总量，总数），enjoy reading （享受阅读）．
【高分句型】
1．I've been in the Student Union for two years，serving as a key memberin the Publicity Department．
此处是现在分词短语作伴随状语，主句为"I've been in the Student Union for two years"，主句的主语为"I"，与所给动词"serve"构成逻辑上的主动关系．
2．In addition，I am fond of making friendly and takingnew challenges，which will facilitate my future role as a president．
此处是由"which"引导的非限制性定语从句，关系代词"which"在从句中作主语，指代前面整个主句的内容．
3．If given this position，I will do my utmost．
此处是条件状语从句中的省略，可以理解为"If I am given this position"，主句为"I will do my utmost"．

解答 Dear Sir/Madam，
      Iam a student named Li Qing from Grade 3 Class 1，writing this letter to campaign for the president of theStudent Union．【高分句型】（开头-引出话题）
      From my point of view，I am the right oneyou want．I've been in the Student Union for two years，serving as a key memberin the Publicity Department．【高分句型】Moreover，I amoutgoing and capable of having effective talks with others．When in charge ofthe Publicity Department，I always helped the former president to organizelarge-scale activities．In addition，I am fond of making friendly and takingnew challenges，which will facilitate my future role as a president．【高分句型】（简述个人信息和具备的竞选条件）
      If given this position，I will do myutmost．【高分句型】On one hand，I will hold moreinteresting and meaningful activities，such as culture festivals，singing competitions，debates and so forth，so as to enrich campus life．On the other hand，what Iwill do is to call for students to protect our campus environment，for I firmlybelieve that a pleasant environment is of vital importance to every student andteacher．【高分句型】（具体阐述将会为本校学生做些什么）
      I willappreciate your kindness if you choose me as the new president．And your promptreply is warmly welcomed．【高分句型】（结尾）
 Best regards
 Li Qing

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．