Question

4．"Planning is good，but doing is better"是一句英国名言．请以此为题目用英语写一篇100-120词的短文．
要求如下：
1．简述你对这句名言的理解；
2．用一个具体事例加以说明；
3．给出恰当的结尾．
注意：1．文章的标题已给出（不计词数）：
2．文中不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、老师或同学姓名等真实信息，否则按作弊行为认定．
Planning Is Good，But Doing Is Better
           ．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲类书面表达．文章要用一般现在时态（阐述句意）和一般过去时态（举例），根据题干要求：先阐述含义，再举例证明，最后点题．可以分三段来完成．重点词汇和短语：in detail详细的；bear no fruit没有结果，不奏效；carry out实施；a case in point恰当的例子，明证；outline列题纲；achieve实现；combine结合；
高分句型：
句型一：a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out．without短语表达条件，相当于if not；
句型二：I Spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps．现在分词作后置定语；
句型三：It came from good planning and better doing，which are combined perfectly．非限制性定语从句；

解答 One possible student version
 Planning Is Good，But Doing Is Better
   Planning is good as it decides in detail how we do．（高分句型一）However，a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out．（阐述句意）
  My experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point．（举例证明）A month before the event，I Spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps．（高分句型二）After that，I set out to read widely for an inspiring topic，wrote a speech，and practiced its delivery in beautiful prounciation with good public speech skills．I finally came out of the contest as the first prize winner．
  I know how I achieved my success．（高分句型三）It came from good planning and better doing，which were combined perfectly．（总结点题）

点评 评分原则  1  本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分．  2  评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分． 3 词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分．  4 评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性． 5 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑．英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受．  6 如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次．  7  内容要点可用不同方式表达，对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分．