Question

15．请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，词数120．
Global Shortage of Fresh Water
1．人们认为淡水是取之不尽的（提示：雨水，河水，井水）
2．实际上淡水是短缺的（提示：人口增加，工业用水增加，污染严重）
3．我们应当怎么办（提示：节约用水，开发新水源）

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息，用英语写一篇短文，对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力．首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭．同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性．
【亮点说明】范文中出现一些常见的短语used up用光；plenty of许多；In fact事实上；At the same time与此同时；In this way用这种方式；It seems as if water is always available around us and we never have to worry about water shortage．这个句子运用 it seem as if 好象 这个固定句型结构；At the same time，a large amount of water has been polluted and wasted every day．这个句子运用现在完成时的被动语态．We have to protect the existing water resources and develop new ones在这个句子中protect 与develop是并列的，所以形式保持一致；
It seems as if water is always available around us and we never have to worry about water shortage．（高分句型一）
With the rapid increase of population and fast development of industries，water is more needed than before．（高分句型二）
Everyone should consciously save on water and certain law should be made that no water will be polluted．（高分句型三）

解答 Global Shortage of Fresh Water
       People often think that water will never be used up．There is plenty of water，such as rain，water from the rivers and wells．It seems as if water is always available around us and we never have to worry about water shortage．（高分句型一）
       In fact water is rather limited on the earth．With the rapid increase of population and fast development of industries，water is more needed than before．（高分句型二）At the same time，a large amount of water has been polluted and wasted every day．Some big cities in China are facing the problem of water shortage already．There，water supply is controlled and industry has been restrained．
       What should we do about the water shortage？I think，first，the people should be made aware of the real situation about the water．Everyone should consciously save on water and certain law should be made that no water will be polluted．（高分句型三）We have to protect the existing water resources and develop new ones．In this way I believe that our cities will not be thirsty for water in the future．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．