Question

1．假如你叫李华，是一位英语爱好者．在一个英语学习论坛上，你看到某网友发出的求助帖：
I always have so many things to do．It seems that I never have enough time to get things done．I don't know how to manage my time effectively．Can anyone offer me some advice Tom
请根据帖子的内容给他提出几点建议．注意：词数110左右．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
 It is of great importance （1）to learn to make better use of your time（2）．更充分运用时间对学习非常重要．
（1）be of+抽象名词=be+形容词；be of importance 表示"重要"；书面表达中用短语代替单词是一个增加亮点的常见手法．
（2）该句中it为形式主语，真正的主语是动词不定式to learn to make better use of your time．
句型二：
it is necessary that you make full use of tiny pieces of time．你有必要充分利用零碎的时间．
该句为it做形式主语that 引导的主语从句，构成句型"It is+necessary/important/essential…+that"，其中从句中的动词往往用"should+动词原形"，should可以省略．
句型三：
focus on your most productive time of day and （1）you will get twice the result with half the effort（2）．聚焦于一天中最富有成效的时间你会得到事半功倍的效果．
（1）本句运用句型"祈使句+and/or+一般将来时的句子"=If引导的条件句+主句．
（2）get twice the result with half the effort事半功倍．

解答 Hi，Tom，
     It is of great importance to learn to make better use of your time【高分句型一】．I'd like to offer some advice（点明主题）．
     First of all，you should make a list and select the most important and urgent things．It is wise to finish them first．What's more，it is necessary that you make full use of tiny pieces of time【高分句型二】．For example，you can do some reading when you are waiting for a bus，or practice listening on your way to school．Last but not least，focus on your most productive time of day and you will get twice the result with half the effort【高分句型三】（具体建议）．
   In a word，time，like water in sponge，can be squeezed out if you like．I hope you will find my advice useful（总结--表达希望）．

点评 写作时首先审题要到位：审体裁、人称和时态；审要点．其次要考虑高分词语和句型的选用，从句、非谓语动词、倒装、强调句型等都是可考虑的高级句型；词语和句型的选用要包含作者的感情色彩和增强表达的气势；再次，运用关联词如besides、what's  more、moreover、for one thing …for another等，使文字更加流畅．