Question

9．假定你是李华．你收到了美国笔友彼得寄来的最新英文小说．请给他回信，内容包括：
1．小说收到；
2．回赠礼物；
3．礼物意义；
4．邀请来华．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Peter，
I'm glad to receive the novel．Thank you for such a lovely gift as I have been expecting for a long time．This novel gives me some insights into American society and daily life．
I know you're interested in Chinese festivals，and therefore I choose an album of paper cutting for you．Paper cutting is a unique form of Chinese cultural relics，which is often used as a decoration for a joyous atmosphere．I hope it will bring happiness and luck to your family as it always does in China．
Expecting you to come to China and experience the rich culture in person．
Best wishes．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇关于礼物的作文．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一感谢礼物；二回赠礼物以及礼物意义；三邀请来华．
高分句型：
1．Thank you for such a lovely gift as I have been expecting for a long time．句子里as引导定语从句，代指先行词a lovely gift，和such呼应．
感谢你这份可爱的礼物，这一直是我期盼的．
2．Paper cutting is a unique form of Chinese cultural relics，which is often used as a decoration for a joyous atmosphere句子里which引导非限制性定语从句，代指先行词Paper cutting．
剪纸是中国文化传承的独特形式之一，它经常用于装饰欢乐气氛的．

解答 Dear Peter，
I'm glad to receive the novel．Thank you for such a lovely gift as I have been expecting for a long time．【高分句型一】This novel gives me some insights into American society and daily life．（感谢礼物）
I know you're interested in Chinese festivals，and therefore I choose an album of paper cutting for you．Paper cutting is a unique form of Chinese cultural relics，which is often used as a decoration for a joyous atmosphere．【高分句型二】I hope it will bring happiness and luck to your family as it always does in China．（回赠礼物以及礼物意义）
Expecting you to come to China and experience the rich culture in person．（邀请来华）
Best wishes．
Yours，
                                                                         Li Hua

点评 考查提纲类作文．
写作文注重句式的变化．常用的句式变化的运用有：简单句转化为并列句或复合句；主动态转化为被动态；陈述转为倒装；一般句转化为强调句；肯定转化为反义词表达或双重否定；状语从句转化为分词短语作状语；定语从句转化为分词短语作定语等等．例如：
　　①The　teacher　said　that　the　plan　was　good．转化为　The　teacher　said　that　the　plan　was　not　bad．
　　②When　the　audience　heard　the　strange　noise，they　all　ran　out　of　the　hall　to　see　what　happened．转化为　Hearing　the　strange　noise，the　audience　all　ran　out　of　the　hall　to　see　what　happened