Question

当今，很多中学生都纷纷开微博。一方面，微博可以作为展示自己的窗口，以释放学习的压力，因此已经被越来越多的中学生所接受。但是，另一方面，很多家长和老师都认为管理个人微博要花相当多的时间和精力，会耽误学习。

请简要介绍这一现象，并发表自己的看法。

注意：词数100-120左右。

参考词汇： 开微博 open one's microblog

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Answer 1

Nowadays, it is common that more and more high school students open their own microblogs on the Internet. For one thing, it can provide a colorful platform to showcase their talent. For another, it is a useful way to release their pressure. And all these make it more and more popular with high school students. But many parents and teachers hold a different view, they think that management one's microblog will take a lot of time and energy, which should be used to study.

In my view, I am greatly in favor of this activity. Today the Internet is playing an important and essential role in our life. Therefore as high school students of the Information Age, we need to learn make use of this meaningful tool to communicate and display ourselves. What's more, opening and organizing microblogs need various abilities such as writing, designing, being skillful at computer and so on. Only if we master those abilities can we make a successful microblog. As a result, we improve ourselves while organizing our microblogs.

In fact, Microblog itself is of little harm. It is your attitude towards it that matters. We should take the advantages and avoid some bad effects.

【解析】

试题分析：考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语In my view,在我看来；in favor of支持；play a role in 扮演重要角色；What's more而且；As a result结果；they think that management one's microblog will take a lot of time and energy, which should be used to study.这个句子which引导非限制性定语从句；What's more, opening and organizing microblogs need various abilities such as writing, designing, being skillful at computer and so on这个句子考查到动名词做主语；Only if we master those abilities can we make a successful microblog.这个句子运用到only +状语+部分倒装 ；

考点： 提纲类作文