分析 本文主要讲述作者遛狗时,发现附近一个人大声打电话.在他离开后,他的钥匙掉在了地上.作者捡起钥匙,跑过去还给他,因打断了他打电话,对此,这个人很恼火.在作者解释了整个事情后,那人对刚才的粗鲁表示歉意.
解答 While took a walk with my pet dog this morning,I found the middle-aged man nearby was shouting on his phone.Obvious,he had a bad day.Before he left,I noticed his keys were on the ground.So I immediately picked∧up and ran away to find the man.Several minutes later,I found him,whom was still shouting on his phone beside his car.I walked to him and asked if he could hold on a little seconds.At first,he was angry about my interruption.Then I showed to his keys and explained the whole thing.On hearing my words,he immediately hang up his phone and apologized for his rude.
详解:
1.took改为taking 考查现在分词.I与take之间是主谓关系,用现在分词,此处是while+动词现在分词作状语.
2.the改为a 考查冠词. man是可数名词,单数形式前加不定冠词a表示泛指.
3.Obvious改为Obviously 考查副词.修饰句子要用副词.
4.Before 改为After 考查连词.根据句意:在他离开后.用连词after.
5.加them 考查代词.pick up是及物动词短语,缺少宾语,用them作其宾语,因是人称代词,要放在up前面.
6.whom改为who 考查定语从句.分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句,先行词him在从句中作主语,用关系代词who.
7.little改为few 考查词语用法.seconds是可数名词复数,用a few修饰,a little修饰不可数名词.
8.去掉to 考查词语用法.show是及物动词,后接名词或代词作宾语时不需要带介词to.
9.hang改为hung 考查动词时态.全文讲述的是已发生的事情,用一般过去时.
10.rude改为rudeness 考查名词.for是介词,后接名词作宾语.
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