Question

7．假如你是李华．英国交换生Peter在你班完成了为期一年的学习，现已回国．根据两校协议，你将到英国学习一年．请给Peter写一封电子邮件，询问以下事宜：
1．对方近况；
2．交换生安排；
3．该校情况．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．邮件开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数．
Dear Peter，
How is everything going on？I can imagine you enjoying yourself with your former friends now．I miss the time we spent together in our class．
Fortunately，I have got the chance to study in your school for a year．So I'd like to know how the exchange students'study and life are arranged in your school，especially the courses to be given．（高分句型一）In addition，I want to learn more about your school so that I can be familiar with the environment．（高分句型二）Meanwhile，having known me well，would you please give me some advice on how I can get well prepared for the study and life in your school？（高分句型三）
I would appreciate it if you could give me an early reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假如你是李华．英国交换生Peter在你班完成了为期一年的学习，现已回国．根据两校协议，你将到英国学习一年．请给Peter写一封电子邮件，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：对方近况；交换生安排；该校情况．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：enjoy yourself过得愉快；Fortunately幸运的是；especially 尤其，特别；In addition另外；be familiar with对…熟悉；Meanwhile同时；get well prepared for很好地准备；
So I'd like to know how the exchange students'study and life are arranged in your school，especially the courses to be given．（高分句型一）
In addition，I want to learn more about your school so that I can be familiar with the environment．（高分句型二）
Meanwhile，having known me well，would you please give me some advice on how I can get well prepared for the study and life in your school？（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Peter，
       How is everything going on？I can imagine you enjoying yourself with your former friends now．I miss the time we spent together in our class．
       Fortunately，I have got the chance to study in your school for a year．So I'd like to know how the exchange students'study and life are arranged in your school，especially the courses to be given．（高分句型一）In addition，I want to learn more about your school so that I can be familiar with the environment．（高分句型二）Meanwhile，having known me well，would you please give me some advice on how I can get well prepared for the study and life in your school？（高分句型三）
       I would appreciate it if you could give me an early reply．
                                                                             Yours，
                                                                             Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．