Question

3．请根据下面提示，写一篇短文．词数不少于50．
You are discussing the following picture with your English friend Jim．Now you are telling him how you understand the picture and what makes you think so．

Answer 1

分析 看图作文分析 本文为看图作文．根据对图片的理解及英语提示写一篇短文．写作时可按"二段式"来写，首先描述图片点明主题，分析其含义，最后发表感想．基本时态为一般现在时．
亮点句型一：What they see is only the good points of their own，yet the weak points of the other，such people also，exist in real life．他们所看到的只是他们自己的优点，而另一些人的弱点也存在于这样的人的现实生活中．本句是一个名词性从句，句中What they see 是主语从句．
亮点句型二：They like to show off and always compare their own strengths with others'weaknesses，which make them blind to their own faults．他们喜欢炫耀自己，总是把自己的优点与别人的弱点相比，这使他们对自己的缺点视而不见．本句中which make them blind to their own faults是一个非限制性定语从句，which指代主句的内容．

解答 I think both the men in the picture are too self-satisfied．While the big man says"I'm taller than you．"，the small man proudly replys"I'm slimmer than you"．What they see is only the good points of their own，yet the weak points of the other，such people also，exist in real life．（亮点句型一） They like to show off and always compare their own strengths with others'weaknesses，which make them blind to their own faults．（亮点句型二）【描述分析图画】
  As a matter of fact．every bean has its black and every one has his own advantages．，we should never think that we are perfect while others are good for nothing．Instead，we should learn from others'good points to perfect ourselves．【发表感想】

点评 看图作文要求将画面所包含的有效信息用文字表达出来，并适当发挥想象．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．