Question

假若你是二十一世纪英文报的编辑Tom，高二学生李华来信说，他即将升入高三，感觉压力大，很担心不能适应高三学习及生活。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。
内容要点如下：
1．表示理解并给予安慰；
2．提出建议并说明理由。
注意：
1．词数120左右；
2．信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
3．信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。
Hi Li Hua,

I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a difficult time at present. 

 

 

Yours,
Tom

 

Answer 1

Hi Li Hua,

I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a difficult time these days. The truth is that every senior three student will face the biggest challenge in their life so you don’t have to worry so much. The important thing is to learn to release your pressure .Four useful tips are listed as follows.

Firstly, find out which subject you are not good at and make a detailed study plan to improve it with your own effort and the teachers’ help. Secondly, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of reducing pressure .In addition, go outdoors and play games with your friends as physical exercise is a relaxing way to get rid of stress. And finally, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards study can be of some help.

I hope you’ll soon adapt yourself to the senior three life.

Yours

Tom

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类书面表达，要求按照李华写的求助信写一封回信，根据信中提到的困扰表示理解和安慰，并提出建议并给出理由。所以考生在写作的时候，要围绕来信的问题一一给与解答。但是光翻译要点肯定不行，还要求考生自己拓展发挥，关键的是在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。也要注意人称，时态语态和常见的语法问题，同时在列举建议和理由的时候要使用合适的连接词如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。

【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，运用了一些词组：as follows如下， a good way of 好方法，get rid of消除， be of some help有些帮助，句式上体现出多变的特点，The truth is that every senior three student will face the biggest challenge in their life so you don’t have to worry so much. 这句话使用了表语从句，The important thing is to learn to release your pressure .这句话使用了不定式，find out which subject you are not good at and make a detailed study plan to improve it with your own effort and the teachers’ help. talk to someone you trust about how you feel. 这句话使用了宾语从句。文章还使用了合适的连接词Firstly, Secondly, In addition, And finally使文章很连贯。

考点：考查提纲类书面表达