Question

4．团队合作（teamwork）在现代是非常重要的．请根据以下要点，简要写一篇关于teamwork的演讲稿，并表明你自己的看法．
合作重要性：
1．在学习和工作中的重要性；
2．节约时间精力和资源；
3．彼此有相互学习的机会．
在学习中怎样与人合作．
注意：
1．词数：120字左右；
2．演讲稿的开头和结尾已经为你写好；
3．可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；
Good morning，everyone!My topic today is"Teamwork"．
                                                                                                    
Thanks for your listening!

Answer 1

分析 No only can cooperation save us lots of time，energy and resources，but also we can learn much from each other．句子里No only…but also 表示"不但…而且"，can cooperation save us lots of time用了倒装．
合作不但节约我们的时间精力和资源而且彼此有相互学习的机会．
So we'll be lucky enough to find someone who holds the same belief to cooperate with due to the fact that we can understand each other．句子里who引导定语从句，代指先行词someone；cooperate with表示"合作"； due to 表示"因为"；that引导同位语从句，解释the fact 的内容．
因此由于互相理解，我们很幸运有一个志同道合的人合作．

解答 Good morning，everyone!My topic today is"Teamwork"．（点明演讲主题）
    In this modern world，if we want to complete our work more efficiently，there is an urgent need for all of us to learn to cooperate with others．No only can cooperation save us lots of time，energy and resources，but also we can learn much from each other．【高分句型一】So we'll be lucky enough to find someone who holds the same belief to cooperate with due to the fact that we can understand each other．【高分句型二】（团队合作在学习和工作中的重要性）
    As a senior three student，in our study we should learn to cooperate with others．For example，when we come across a difficult exercise，we can talk with each other to get the right answer．Personally，teamwork means we should try to combine our ideas with others'．（自己的经历证明）
    Thanks for your listening．

点评 考查提纲类作文．
写作完成后，通读全文，检查内容是否符合要求，要点是否齐全，格式是否正确，词数是否合乎要求．最主要的是要检查句子是否符合英语习惯，句型是否正确，语法是否正确（包括句子结构、时态、语态、主谓一致等），检查单词是否误写、少写，习语搭配是否得当等，以及字母大小写、标点符号是否正确等，这就要求考生在定稿认真检查，仔细核对，及时发现并改正问题，保证要点齐全，句子完整通顺，力争减少失误．