Question

19．此题要求改正所给短文中的错误．对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉．
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词．
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词．
注意：原行没有错的不要改．
I'd love to tell you something about my vacation．I've been（76）√looking forward to visit the East Lake for a long time，（77）visitingYesterday，with my friends，I paid a visit it．We set off at（78）to7：00 am by bus．It is 8 kilometers far away from our city，and（79）去掉farwhen we got there，it was 7：20 am．There we have a wonderful （80）hadtime．We spent the whole morning boating sand fished on the lake．（81）finishingThen we had a picnic by the lake．On the afternoon，we climbed（82）Inthe Snake Island，picking the beautiful flowers and took a lot of pictures（83）picked Time passed very quick．Before we knew it，it was already 16：00，（84）quicklybut we had to go back．How about your vacation？Please write to（85）andme as soon as possible．

Answer 1

分析 短文讲述了作者在假期的一次旅行．作者与朋友们一起去了距离市区8公里的东湖，他们花了一上午的时间划船，钓鱼，还在湖边进行野餐；下午他们爬了蛇岛在蛇岛上摘花，拍照，一直到了下午四点多才返回．作者和朋友们度过了愉快的一天．

解答 I'd love to tell you something about my vacation．I've been （76）√
looking forward to visit the East Lake for a long time，（77）visiting
Yesterday，with my friends，I paid a visit∧it．We set off at    （78）to
7：00 am by bus．It is 8 kilometers far away from our city，and   （79）去掉far
when we got there，it was 7：20 am．There we have a wonderful   （80）had
time．We spent the whole morning boatings and fishedon the lake．  （81）finishing
Then we had a picnic by the lake．On the afternoon，we climbed   （82）In
the Snake Island，picking the beautiful flowers and took a lot of pictures   （83）picked 
 Time passed very quick．Before we knew it，it was already 16：00，（84）quickly
but we had to go back．How about your vacation？Please write to   （85）and
me as soon as possible．
76．√
77．visit改为visiting；考查固定短语搭配，look forward to中to是介词，后面跟名词或动名词．
78．visit后面加to；考查固定短语搭配，pay a visit to后接地点，表示"去某地参观，旅游"．
79．去掉far；考查固定搭配，It is 8 kilometers away from our city意为"它距离我们的城市8公里远"，当away前面有具体的数字时，要去掉far．
80．have改为had；考查动词的时态，短文讲的是假期发生的事情，所以要用过去时态．
81．finished改为finishing；考查并列结构，用finishing和and前面的boating构成并列结构，在句中作状语．
82．On改为In；考查介词，"在下午"要用"in the afternoon"，这是固定用法．
83．picking改为picked；考查动词的时态，这里用picked和前面的climbed以及后面的took构成并列结构，并列作句子的谓语．
84．quick改为quickly；考查副词，句中需要修饰的是动词passed，所以要用副词形式．
85．but改为and；考查连词，结合上下文句意，这里应当是并列关系而不是转折，故用and．

点评 在短文改错当中，首先要从整体掌握短文大意，结合上下文语境并充分运用平时掌握的基础知识，充分运用所学的基础知识，包括一些实词和虚词的用法，固定短语搭配，习惯性用法，结合上下文整体关系，找出错误并加以修正．