Question

12．100个单词左右．开头已给出，不计入总词数．

Ways to Keep Healthy
饮食健康，多吃水果蔬菜，保持均衡饮食．	摒弃（get rid of）不良习惯，按时吃早饭．	早睡早起，多做运动，强身健体．

Health is very important to us．Good health can help us enjoy our life more．But how to keep us healthy
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Answer 1

分析 考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心．注意文章文体、人称和时态．要求介绍．同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性．温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．
【亮点说明】这篇短文不使用了大量的短语，可见英语功底扎实．．如we'd better eat more vegetables and fruits．It's important for us to keep a balanced diet．it's good for us to go to bed early and get up early等，First，Second，Third，Finally等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理．
First，we should eat healthy food，and we'd better eat more vegetables and fruits．（高分句型一）
The more regularly we eat，the healthier we are．（高分句型二）
 If we do like that，we'll have a happy and healthy life．（高分句型三）

解答 Health is very important to us．Good health can help us enjoy our life more．But how to keep us healthy？First，we should eat healthy food，and we'd better eat more vegetables and fruits．（高分句型一）It's important for us to keep a balanced diet．Second，we have to get rid of bad habits．We must have a regular breakfast．The more regularly we eat，the healthier we are．（高分句型二）Third，it's good for us to go to bed early and get up early．Finally，we need to take enough exercise to make us strong．
      If we do like that，we'll have a happy and healthy life．（高分句型三）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．