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19．假设你是李华，正在英国伦敦参加夏令营．请给在该市的网友Jack写一封电子邮件，说明你想与他见面，并去参观他的学校．同时告诉他，你准备了中国结作为礼物赠送给他，感谢他在网上解答你在英语学习上的问题．
注意：1．词数100左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．参考词汇：中国结：Chinese knot
Dear Jack，
How are you doing these days？
I'm writing this letter to tell you I'm at a summer camp in London now，and I think it's a good chance for us to meet and have a talk．（高分句型一）You know，I always want to know what your school is like and I'm also very curious about your school life．（高分句型二）If convenient，it will be great to visit your school during my stay in London．
By the way，I bring a small gift for you，which is a fine Chinese knot．（高分句型三）I really thank you for your patient and clear explanation of my questions on English learning before．
I'm looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
LiHua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假设你是李华，正在英国伦敦参加夏令营．请给在该市的网友Jack写一封电子邮件，说明你想与他见面，并去参观他的学校．同时告诉他，你准备了中国结作为礼物赠送给他，感谢他在网上解答你在英语学习上的问题．写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息   2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：be curious about 对…好奇；By the way顺便说一下；look forward to 盼望；If convenient如果方便的话；
I'm writing this letter to tell you I'm at a summer camp in London now，and I think it's a good chance for us to meet and have a talk．（高分句型一）
You know，I always want to know what your school is like and I'm also very curious about your school life．（高分句型二）
  By the way，I bring a small gift for you，which is a fine Chinese knot．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Jack，
      How are you doing these days？
      I'm writing this letter to tell you I'm at a summer camp in London now，and I think it's a good chance for us to meet and have a talk．（高分句型一）You know，I always want to know what your school is like and I'm also very curious about your school life．（高分句型二）If convenient，it will be great to visit your school during my stay in London．
     By the way，I bring a small gift for you，which is a fine Chinese knot．（高分句型三）I really thank you for your patient and clear explanation of my questions on English learning before．
      I'm looking forward to your reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．