短文改错英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下小作文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

3．必须按答题要求做题，否则不给分。

On March 25th last spring, I, as well as my brothers, were leaving for Nanjin in order to go to Jack's concert. I very fond of Jack's songs so I couldn't wait to see him. After we arrived at the center of the water stadium, the large number of people were waiting there. We met a few exciting fans of Jack, smiling and holding picture of Jack. Finally, at 8 o'clock in the evening, Jack turned down slowly among the cheers of all fans. Dressing in a red coat, Jack sang many more beautiful songs.

Following his rhythm, I sang with music. Finally, the concert ended up with a famous song by Jack.

书面表达

假如你是学生会主席，请根据下面图表，用英语写一则关于春游的通知。

注意：

1.通知必须包括表内所列内容，可以适当调整内容的顺序和增加细节，使其连贯、完整。

2.词数：100左右。3.通知时间：3月20日

4.参考词汇：植物园the botanical garden; 学生会the Students' Union

Last fall, I went to the US as an exchange student. I’ll never forget my homestay there ______ I became a real DIY enthusiast.

A. where B. when C. that D. which

To save trouble, you may as well _______ the product online before you place an order.

A. predict B. polish C. promote D. preview

— I think you’d better write him a letter immediately.

— ______? He’ll come here the day after tomorrow.

A. Why bother B. So what C. Why not D. How come

Although the plan is not so perfect, they are strongly opposed ______ it.

A. to not conduct B. not to conduct

C. to not conducting D. not to conducting

Didn’t it occur to you ______ we could have solved the problem in an easier way?

A. that B. whether C. how D. why

I see no reason why they shouldn’t go on playing for another four or five years __ they are fit enough.

A. unless B. so that C. though D. providing that

Since Perry went abroad, his house has been neglected and weeds are _______ everywhere.

A. winding up B. springing up

C. lighting up D. rising up

Much as I would love ______ to the party yesterday, I didn’t because I had to prepare for the interview.

A. to go B. going

C. to have gone D. having gone