4.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(
) 并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
In the past my hometown was the most beautiful place.Thick trees and green grass could be seen anywhere.In order to build more house and grow more crops,people cut down much more trees.As time went on,the whole forest was almost destroyed.Gradually,the green hills turn wasteland.As a result,sandstorms struck us now and then,from what we suffered a lot.But I do wish all the people could realize the terribly disaster caused by man.What's more,they should take good care of our nature and punish those who against the law.