15．下面短文中共有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写上该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
  2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
If a foreign friend wants to visit to China，the place I'd like to take him or her around is Hangzhou．
I have been to Hangzhou only once； however，I am deeply impressed by its beauty．The West Lake，with a history of more than 2000years，combining naturally with the modern international city．Besides，there are some ancient Buddhist temples locate along the scenic lake，travellers can visit it after rowing on the lake．In addition to the wonderful scene of Hangzhou，they can also have the opportunity to enjoy the best tea，Chinese Longjin Tea，which had ranked first among China's top ten famous tea for centuries．
I'm sure that a foreigner can definite experience the culture of China in Hangzhou．I wish to visit Hangzhou second time with my foreign friend．

14．下面短文中有10处语言错误．请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符后（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
I am writing to ask for whether you are able to do me a favor．I want to have a pen friend，hopeful a girl in her early twenty，and with interests similar to mine．In my mind，she is someone interesting in traveling，swimming，and playing table tennis．Beside，it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have been keeping that at home for some time．With such a pen pal，I hope I can share her my experiences in traveling，taking care of pets，or whichever we have in common．I believe I would improve my English by doing so and learning more about her country．I am looking forward to hearing from you soon．

13．What does our future depend on？It is determined by many things，such as the opportunities and help，but our determination and hard work can play a much important role．In another words，we are the masters of our future．Taking Abraham Lincoln for example，He born in a poor family，but only received a limited education in his childhood．Yet through his efforts，he not only changed his fate but also the history of American．Even these days，Lincoln is still regarded as one of the most inspiring figure in the world．Therefore，I firm believe that our future is on our own hands．

12．A．Enjoy college life．
B．Manage your time．
C．Look for opportunities．
D．Don't be afraid to ask for help．
E．Use the campus study resources．
F．Don't be afraid to leave your comfort zone．

The first year of college is one of the best periods of life，but it can also be a challenging thing．These pieces of advice will help you survive the first year in college．
（61）F．When I was a first year student I was a bit shy and I treated going to college as a huge life change．New circle of contacts made me hesitate to step outside my comfort zone．But finally I overcame my fears and inner constraint （拘束）．There are many wonderful people who can give you valuable advice and support if you cannot make up your mind to do something．That's why you should try to be confident while expressing yourself．An active and funny college life will provide you with wonderful memories．
（62）D．There's a large amount of information you've got to know．You might understand how to register for classes，what the names of your professors are or how to do one or another task in a proper way．College is full of students who are former freshmen．They can give you a helping hand if you don't know something．Moreover，many professors，teachers and other college members can answer your questions．The sooner you delve into （探究） your college life，the more chances you'll get the reputation of a successful student and become knowledgeable．
（63）B．Your future success depends on the way you spend your free time．At college，it's necessary to find time for studies and for having fun．One of the best ways to manage your time during the first year is to make a schedule．It will help you succeed and reach all your goals．I always tried to set priorities in my study and paid more attention to the subjects I was really interested in．But it's better to develop your skills in other subjects as well，because the professors expect you to be prepared and ready to answer．
（64）E．Many students complain about the lack of literature and about the high prices of textbooks．Why not use the resources offered by a college you're studying at？There are many databases，labs and libraries，which can help you expand your mind．If you have some difficulties，you can get valuable information using e-books that are available through the college account．This abundance of information is created to improve the students'skills and learning experience．
（65）C．As far as I know，all college campuses offer you a variety of student organizations and a range of student programs，competitions，part-time campus jobs．Different social and sport organizations can help you express yourself and discover your interests．Plus you can get acquainted with people who will help you start a successful career．As a student of the first year you need to make friends and get involved in different student communities．When I was a freshman I had achance to take a 4-week course in Europe．Also，many of my friends worked as volunteers at local hospitals．

11．My father grew up in Oklahoma during the early years of the Great Depression．He was the only living child of a hard-working farmer and a （21）Bmother．When Dad completed eighth grade，my grandfather believed his only son would work on the farm．My grandmother，（22）D，understood the door that education could open even in （23）Aeconomic times．She persuaded grandfather to （24）ADad to finish high school．
Dad worked hard and completed high school at the age of 16．At last，grandpa was to have his wish．Dad would work on the farm，easing the economic and physical （25）Cgrandpa carried．But grandmother again （26）Bgrandpa to permit my father to go to college．
After（27）C，grandpa made the most difficult decision of his lifetime．He walked to the chicken coop（鸡笼子），where he did his（28）D．Taking a shovel in his work-worn hands，grandpa（29）Ba jar that held all the family's savings．He offered the jar and its precious （30）Cto Dad，saying，"Here boy，go make something of yourself．"
Realizing that his family was （31）Aall their savings by investing in his education，Dad became a steward of those funds．He （32）Bhis bachelor's degree and then went on to the University of Oklahoma，where he graduated second in his （33）Dschool class in 1936．Jobs were hard to （34）Cwhen Dad graduated，so he opened his own practice and lived in a home with a dirt floor．He worked long hours，but I remember him （35）Dthe great books he discovered in the course of his education with me．
Our family was changed by the long walk grandpa took to the chicken coop．Education is （36）Aan investment in our family．It is a treasure．I（37）Bmy father to college and law school，and all of my children have also （38）Ahigher education．We have been transformed by a sacrifice made two （39）Dago by a loving，if not fully convinced，grandfather and a persistent grandmother and that has made all the（40）C．

21．A．beautiful	B．devoted	C．lazy	D．curious
22．A．so	B．thus	C．otherwise	D．however
23．A．tough	B．great	C．peaceful	D．competitive
24．A．permit	B．take	C．ask	D．force
25．A．pains	B．troubles	C．burdens	D．activities
26．A．refused	B．begged	C．ordered	D．required
27．A．graduation	B．work	C．reflection	D．permission
28．A．cooking	B．cleaning	C．farming	D．banking
29．A．picked up	B．dug up	C．broke up	D．cut up
30．A．books	B．bills	C．contents	D．coins
31．A．sacrificing	B．storing	C．treasuring	D．wasting
32．A．failed	B．received	C．offered	D．needed
33．A．maths	B．education	C．economics	D．law
34．A．come off	B．come about	C．come by	D．come on
35．A．making	B．writing	C．protecting	D．sharing
36．A．more than	B．rather than	C．other than	D．less than
37．A．joined	B．followed	C．advised	D．companied
38．A．sought	B．insisted	C．favored	D．considered
39．A．years	B．centuries	C．decades	D．generations
40．A．sense	B．use	C．difference	D．effect．

10．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文  中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
    2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
I'm glad to receive your letter．You asked me what I would prepare myself for the coming college entrance English exam but I've summarised several points for you．Firstly，I'll review all the 3，500word one by one and pay specially attention to the important ones．Secondly，I'll listen to the English twice a day so that I can get full marks in the listening part．Besides，daily reading and writing exercises can help me gain more confidence as before．Another point that should never be ignored was that handwriting is the key to get a much higher score．
I hope our plans can be great benefit to you．Good luck with your English study．

9．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文    中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修    改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：
  1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Everyone should take the action to reduce haze（雾霾），which is harmless to our health．First of all，I believe that if we plant more tree，there will be less haze in their city．Trees can absorb exhaust fumes（尾气）from cars，thus reduce pollution．Second，the government should punish the factories where produce too many fumes．Exhaust fumes is the main cause of haze and do greatly harm to people's health．Maybe we can move factories to areas where few people live．Third，I think it was a great idea to encourage people to use public transportation．Last but not least，we can call on citizens ride bikes if they travel short journeys．

8．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词． 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Once，when l was a teenager，my father and I were standing in line to buy ticket for the circus．Finally，there was only one family among us and the ticket counter．This family made deep impression on me．There were eight children，both probably under the age of twelve．You could tell they didn't have a lot of money．Their clothes was not expensive，and they were clean．The children were well-behaved，all of them standing in line，two-by-two behind their parents，held hands．They were excitedly talking about the clowns，elephants and other performances what they would see that night．Everyone could sense that they have never been to the circus ago．

7．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．作文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Recently，we have had a discussion about that China should make every effort to developing car industry．Opinions divided on the question．
60% of the students hold the belief that China should full develop car industry．It will not only promote economic development but provides more jobs to workers as well．Beside，cars can help to save time and improve people's life quality．On the other hand，40% think China should limit their car industry development．Otherwise，the city traffic will be much more heavier and more traffic accident will occur．As a result，new roads will be built but occupy more farmland．

6．It was the second time that I have been to the hospital．（41）Cit was a weekday，there were still lots of people there，which （42）Dme at first．Most of us live healthy lives，so perhaps we never realize that there are so many people（43）Bpain and torment．
As I walked along the hallway，I saw a variety of people and felt many things（44）Athrough my mind．I heard a small laugh of joy and（45）Bmy head to see what had happened．
A woman was standing in the hallway，saying to her husband beside："（46）Dis okay!Your baby is moving around like always in my belly（肚子）．"The man smiled and said："Our child must have a（47）Clike mine．"They smiled at each other and walked（48）Baway．A small new （49）Amakes so many people so happy．
I was（50）Dwhy my parents always looked so（51）Cwhen I told them that I felt unwell．Parents（52）Btheir children's lives more dearly than their own．
Another noise．I heard a nurse say："We are （53）Cthe operation．Don't worry．"An operation is something that I have feared ever since （54）A．I fear the （55）Dof it．If an operation is（56）B，everybody is happy．But if not，the world seems to（57）A．After all，we know the people around us will leave our world （58）C．
Facing the forces of life and death，we are as （59）Das drops of water in an ocean，only there to be pushed back and forth．
I felt myself （60）Ain that exact moment and place，in my deepest thoughts．

41．A．As	B．Because	C．Although	D．When
42．A．frightened	B．excited	C．worried	D．surprised
43．A．going for	B．going through	C．going over	D．going into
44．A．flash	B．appear	C．form	D．fly
45．A．held	B．raised	C．rose	D．kept
46．A．Nothing	B．Something	C．Anything	D．Everything
47．A．hobby	B．behavior	C．character	D．movement
48．A．quietly	B．happily	C．sadly	D．hurriedly
49．A．life	B．boy	C．daughter	D．person
50．A．realized	B．told	C．recognized	D．reminded
51．A．down	B．unhappy	C．worried	D．nervous
52．A．see	B．treat	C．look	D．think
53．A．getting	B．experiencing	C．doing	D．carrying
54．A．childhood	B．fatherhood	C．adulthood	D．neighborhood
55．A．danger	B．failure	C．certainty	D．uncertainty
56．A．good	B．successful	C．quick	D．easy
57．A．darken	B．change	C．brighten	D．stop
58．A．early	B．temporally	C．permanently	D．quickly
59．A．abundant	B．important	C．necessary	D．unimportant
60．A．grow up	B．rise up	C．grow old	D．grow crazy