假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Ladies and gentlemen,
May I have your attentions, please? In Saturday, July 27th, there will have a few visits to different places. Everyone was welcome. All the visitors will be divided into four groups. Each group of visitors can visit one of the place – a factory, a farm, a school and a hospital. Please you sign your name at the Service Desk before 9: 00 a.m. and say what place you wish to visit. We’ll set out after the breakfast at 8 and we will return in the afternoon. We will have lunch at place of visit.
We wish you a pleasant journey. That’ s all.
Thank you.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
主意：1. 每处错误及修改均限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Editor,
I am a senior high student. I am writing to share my worries with my classmates.
With the development of IT industry, many of my classmate have 3G mobile phones. It can inform us the latest news, make us relaxing and keep in touch with our friends, but they play computer games, watch movies or chat online after the class, even in class. These has caused them to lose their interested in their lessons. I hoped 3G mobile phones should be banned at school. Do you agree about me?
I am looking forward to your earlier reply.
Yours,
Li Hua

假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除、或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错词的下面划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：
1．每次错误以及修改均限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者从第十一处起不计分。例如：
The temple stands nearby the city. It dated from 1961 and is 50 meters in high. It is one of the most famous temple in the country and about 5,000 tourists  come to visit every year. Five years ago, people decided to repair the temple, but this work was completed last year. The ground floor has been complete painted, and the roof, too. All the rooms has been protected from birds by fixed wires across the windows. Trees and flowers have been planted around the temple. We believe, in a few years, the temple will take on new look. 

下面文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。
修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分。
Rose wanted a job. She went to many offices and she didn't like any of them.      One day she saw a board in an office read: "This office needs a typist whom  can type 200 words a minute." Rose was exciting. When Rose went to the manager's office, the man was writing something. Rose knocked at the door and the manager raised her head. "Do you need a typist?" asked Rose. "Yes!" he said. Rose clapped her hand. She couldn't help saying, "OK! How much will you pay for me every month?" The manager thought for a while and said, "I will pay you 77 dollars for first three months. Then I will pay you 30 dollars every month." Rose smiled and answer, "Great! I will come and work here three months late." The manager was speechless.

此题要求改正短文中的错误。如有错误则按下列情况改正：此行没有错误，在该句右边的横线上打（√）此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该句右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（  ），在该句右边的横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该句右边横线上写出改正后的词。
Dear friends,  
It is real a good chance to have met all of you here. 1. _____________
We have spent several precious weekend in learning in the   2. _____________
English Club. Although we have been members for a short  3. _____________
period of time, we have made a great progress. That is   4. _____________
because we are all very much active and the activities are not  5. _____________
only enjoyable and also helpful. Besides, the foreign teachers  6. _____________
here work hard and try his best to make the activities   7. _____________
lively and interested. I am very pleased to say that all of 8. _____________
us greatly improved our spoken English so far. I am      9. _____________
looking forward to see all of you again in the near future! 10._____________
Thank you.                                              
Thank you.

假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中
有10处错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从11处起)不计分。
I love camping. It’s my favourite way to spent the summer vacation.  Last year, my family and I went camping in the countryside. It was one of the most excited experiences I had never had. We slept in a tent and went on a long walk every day. We cook over a fire and the food always tasted wonderfully. For a whole week, I saw lovely mountain views or breathed fresh air. At night, I heard the gentle wind blowing in the tree, and I felt so peaceful.  It doesn’t cost many to camp, and what I believe it’s the best way to get close nature and enjoy its beauty.

请修改以下短文：文中共有10处语言错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在该词下面写出修改的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下面划一条横线（_），并在该词下面写出修改的词。注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Joe,
I’m sorry to hear that you want to give up apply for a volunteer for the 2013 National
Games. In my opinion, you’d better not give up this idea.
On the one hand, you have many advantage. First of all, you are good at communicating
others and ready to help others. In addition to, you are familiar with Shenyang. Secondly, be
a volunteer can broaden your outlook and improved yourself, that will be beneficial to your
future work and life. Therefore, I sincere hope you can seize this chance and try your best to
be a outstanding volunteer. Please consider my advice. I’m really looking forward to your
reply.
Yours,
Jane

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改 10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Ms Smith,
I am secretary of the City Student Union (CSU). We were organizing an art exhibition for high school students in city. It will be held on the 9^th of July in the Exhibition Hall of Beihai. More than 1,000 painting will be on show, but high school students and teachers from all the eight districts will come to the event. As you are very popularly with our Chinese high school students, we’d like to invite for you to the exhibition. We would be grateful when you could join them that day.
Looking forward to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Ming

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一个横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。　　
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。
Li Hua and I were neighboures and we went to same school. We always went to school together. We were good friend and had a great deal to share with every day. However, one day, Li Hua copied my homework, which made me such angry that I did not want to be friends with him any long. Then on Monday morning I ran downstairs without realize it was raining, but there was no time to return home to fetch an umbrella. It happens that Li Hua was just around the corner and be offered to share her umbrella with me. He made apology to me in a gently voice. I forgave him but gave him a hug.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday I saw a worst storm in years．It came sudden and went on for over three hours．After lunch, I went into my room to have a rest．The air was hot, but all was quiet．Then a strong wind started to blow into my room．Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air and some flew out the open window．As I ran out to catch it, big drop of rain began to fall．When I come back into the house, it was raining more harder and harder．Then I heard a loud crashing sound from the back of the house．When I ran out to find out that had happened, a big tree had fallen down and broke the top of the backroom．