假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误机器修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
With help of the Internet, shopping is not a difficult work. Just clicking your
mouse to choose the article you like, and the shopping is finished. You
needn’t step out the room. It seems easy and quick. And there’s always a
trap online. If you are careless, it will bring you trouble. You may find the
color of the article is differently from what you want, or the size is either too
small nor too big. If you want to be different, you’d better not to buy clothes
online. Once you put up the clothes you bought online and go out, you will
find many people in the street wearing the same clothes like you.  

假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的作文。文中共有十处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个词。
增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改十处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
After shopping, Mother and I went to a restaurant for lunch. I notice Mother looking at a nearby table occupy by an elderly woman and young couple. They ate silently, and it was clearly that things were not going well. As we left, Mother stopped on their table. “Excuse me,” she said, put her arm around the unhappy old woman. “You remind me so many of my mother. May I hug you?” The woman smiled happily as she accepted to it. After we left, I said, “That was very nice of you, Mother. So I didn't think she looked like Grandma.” “Neither did me,” said Mother cheerfully.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除
或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（＾），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线〔\〕划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
　Dear Bob,
　　 Hello. I learn about you from my English teacher, Miss Fang. I’d like to your penfriend, and get to know more about your country. First, let me tell you something more about myself.My name is Li Hua. I live in Beijing, where is the capital of the  China. I go to Hongqi Middle School.  We study quite a few subject, such as maths, Chinese,English and physics. I use to play ping-pong a lot in my spare time, but now I am interesting in football.Do you play any ball games?  What your favorite sport? I look forward to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（／）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1。每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者不计分。
Last Saturday,I put my wallet in the bag which was at back of my bike.I rode for about half an hour.As I neared my home I found that I kept the bag opening all the way.The wallet had fallen out somewhere in the way,it made me upset.Just then I received a phone call saying that my neighbor is waiting for me..Someone had sent it to my home.I felt very pleasing and I went home at once.It was turned out that I put my ID card in the wallet.No one was at home for he gave it to my neighbor.I have never found out what he was because he did not tell my neighbors his name when he left.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同旧式写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词作斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Yesterday I bought new coat in a shop. When I came back home, I found
it so big for me . This morning, I went to the shop and change the coat I bought. But the sales girl in the shop treated me cold.  Firstly, she didn’t admit why I bought the coat in her shop. Then, she said I made it be dirty . So I got very angry but quarreled with him, pointing to the rules on the wall.  Just then, a manager turned up. He said sorry to me and they changed other one for me . At last, I said goodbye to them and took the new coat home.

文中共有10处语言错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
Dear peter,
I am very exciting to hear that you are coming to our school soon. Now let me to introduce our school to you. Our school is a famous school with long history. We have many experiencing teachers and excellent equipments. There are two teach buildings. One is for seniors and the other is for juniors. There is two lab buildings and a library. Except Chinese, maths, English, physics and chemistry, We have some electives(选修课).The students can choose what they like attend. We love our school. I am looking forward to meet you soon.

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面加上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Mrs. Black was having a lot of trouble with her skin, so she went to see her doctor and had some test. The next day the doctor telephoned her to give her the list of things she should not eat. Mrs. Black careful wrote all the things down a piece of paper, which she then left it beside the telephone when she went out to a ladies’ meeting. When she got back home two hours late, she found her husband waiting for her. Carried a big basket full of food, she said, “Hello, dear. I’ve done all your shopping for you.” “Done all my shopping?” she asked in surprise, “But why did you know what I wanted?” “Well, when I got home, I found your shopping list beside the telephone,” answered her husband, “So I went down to the shop and bought everything you have written down.”

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。短文中有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Cathy,
I’m writing to share my opinion on fashion with you, for I had just heard that you are disappointing because you can’t afford famous brands.
I shall say that it is naturally for people to care about his appearance. And it is true that fashionable thing like clothes and shoes will make one more eye-catching. Therefore, I think it is really a waste of money to buy famous brands. Besides, it will also add the burden of your parents.
What’s more, beauty is just skin deep. There are many things in which can make you popular beside fashion. A great amount of knowledge and a warm heart will surely win other’s respect.
As the saying goes, never judge the person by appearance. I do hope that you will remember the saying and be as happy as you used to be.
Yours,
Jane

文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉；
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词；
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词. 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
I couldn’t believe my ears when I heard my name calling. I was chosen to play the leading role in the play，that was my dream. As a shy and thin girl，I used to be quite afraid of speaking in the public. But my parents and teachers always encourage me to do so. Now I have changed great. In class，I am often the first one to stand up and answer questions even if I may take some mistakes. No pain，no gain. Now I am always brave enough overcome the difficulty in my heart and have changed in a lively girl. So my experience shows that we should not be afraid of losing face but only in this way can we make progresses.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I’m a newcomer here of a small town. I would describe myself as shy and quietly. Before my classmates, it seems always difficult for me to do things well as them. I’m sure they will laugh to me and see me as a fool. So I feel happy every day.
Besides, I have few friends. I don’t know that they don’t like to talk with me. Sometimes, we talked to each other very well in class, but after class we become stranger at once. I am trying to improve the situation since it doesn’t seem to work. Can you tell me about what I should do?