答案与简析：

　　76. famous前加上a。 （名词数）。 77. 正确 78. we前面加when，引导一个时间状语从句。（句子成分多分析） 79. them→us （逻辑错误须关注） 80. visiting→visited（非谓动词细辨别） 81. picture→pictures（名词数） 82. passes→passed（动词形） 83. 去掉down（习惯用法要记住） 84. and→but（but, and, or和so） 85. 去掉at（句子成分多分析 / 习惯用法要记住）。

 (一)

Most families in China hoped their single children will          76．_______

have a happy future, so they are very strict in their children.  77．_______

So do teachers in schools! Many children are given so much       78．_______

homework that they have hardly any spare time have sports.       79．_______

The children are forbidden to do anything but to study. No       80．_______

wonder so many children are tired of lessons. Some even          81．_______

attack or kill his parents and teachers! I believe many people   82．_______

already read this kind of news in newspapers or magazines.       83．_______

Shouldn't we draw lesson from the accidents? Now our             84．_______

government is making out a plan to solve the education problems. 85．_______

Hi, Susan.

I’m sorry that I wasn’t able to return to your　　 76　　　　

bike on time yesterday. I mean to give it　　　 77　　　

back to you before four in the afternoon，and I　　 78　　　

was hold up on my way back. Just before I　　　 79　　　

turned corner of park street. I happened to　　　　 80　　　

see an accident. A little girl was hurt and her　　 81　　　

mother needed help. So I helped them going to　 82　　　

the nearest hospital. I stayed here for one and　　 83　　　

a half hour and made sure that the girl was all　　 84　　

hope you understand. 　　　　　　　　　　　　 85　　　

Thank you!

Li Ling

My classmate, Joseph, is at present in hospital

With a breaking leg. He was walking to school the other　　 76.　　　　　

day when he let a bicycle ran right into him . He never　　 77.　　　　　

watches where he is going, so he often gets into the trouble. 78.　　　　　　

But he is having a nice time there. He has a comfortable.　 79.　　　　　　

room, patiently nurses, and a great deal of time to read.　　 80.　　　　　　

Some friends of his go to see him every day, they take him 81.　　　　　　

Lost of good book and fresh fruit. He is not losing any time　 82.　　　　　　

From school because he is busy study what he has　　　 83.　　　　　

Missed in classes. The doctor says he is recovering fast than 84.　　　　　　

Expected and will b out of hospital a few weeks.　　　 85.　

第二节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分, 满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误每行只有一个错误，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉；在该行右边的横线上写上该词，也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符（∧），在该行右边的横线上写上该加的词。
此行错一词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
My hometown is a pretty city，so people there are　　      76.__________
kind and polite. With coming of spring，grass and 　　　  77.__________
trees turn green，and flowers grew in many colors.　       78.__________
In summer, the sea under the blue sky is even more　       79.__________
beautiful. After autumn arrives，the city looks as an 　     80.__________
old man with leaves fallen from the trees. In winter，　　   81.__________
a lot of white birds come to my city for food. I　can　　　　82.__________
wait more patiently above the sea for quite a long　　　　　83.__________
time. While they find fish come to the surface, they　　　　 84.__________
fly down immediate and catch them without delay.           85.__________
That is my city, and I love it so much.　

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：

此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意：原文没有错的不要改。

A helicopter is sometime more useful than a big plane. When 76. _________

it takes off, it goes straight on. When it lands, it comes 77. _________

straight down. It needs not only a small place for both taking 78. _________

off and landing. When a tall building is on fire, we can　 79. _________

see a helicopter to come down to rescue the people on the top 80. _________

of them. Helicopters make many kinds of work easy. They 81. _________

are used to making maps, flying over the ground and taking 82. _________

pictures from the air. To rescue people whom are very　 83. _________

sick or in danger, helicopters are send to some faraway 84. _________

areas. The helicopter may take place of a car or a train　 85. _________

in some cases.