增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：   

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I was born in a farmer family in Suizhong county, Liaoning                  

Province in June, in 1965．When I was a child, I dreamed of flying       

in the sky．I joined the army in June, 1983．In 1992, I was sent to        

the air force base．In August, 1996, I was one of the first 14 members     

from 1,500 pilots through the physical examination．I worked hardly,      

because I was among the first astronauts of our country in 1998 ．              

I was chosen one of the first man space aircraft astronauts later．

On Oct．15, 2003, I successfully fly to space, circled       

around the earth about 14 circle and then returned ．I was honored        

to have given the chance to be the first Chinese to travel in space．          

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：   
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I was born in a farmer family in Suizhong county, Liaoning                 
Province in June, in 1965．When I was a child, I dreamed of flying       
in the sky．I joined the army in June, 1983．In 1992, I was sent to        
the air force base．In August, 1996, I was one of the first 14 members    
from 1,500 pilots through the physical examination．I worked hardly,     
because I was among the first astronauts of our country in 1998 ．             
I was chosen one of the first man space aircraft astronauts later．
On Oct．15, 2003, I successfully fly to space, circled       
around the earth about 14 circle and then returned ．I was honored        
to have given the chance to be the first Chinese to travel in space．        

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

         删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

         修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

         2．只允许修改10 处，多者（从第11 处起）不计分。

It was Sunday yesterday. But Sally and I decided to visit the Xi’an Zoo, where is only four kilometres from our school. At nine in the morning, we waited the bus at the bus stop. After 15 minutes or so, we got on the No. 10 bus excited. On arrival, we find the zoo crowding with people, students, workers , villagers and so on. Most of them was young parents with his children. There were many kinds of animals in the zoo. They were elephants, bears, lions, monkeys and the beautiful birds. Children liked the monkeys very much. At 12 o’clock, we returned back home. What good time we had at the zoo!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　 I was born in a farmer family in Suizhong county, Liaoning

Province in June, in 1965．When I was a child, I dreamed of flying

in the sky．I joined the army in June, 1983．In 1992, I was sent to

the air force base．In August, 1996, I was one of the first 14 members

from 1,500 pilots through the physical examination．I worked hardly,

because I was among the first astronauts of our country in 1998 ．

On Oct．15, 2003, I successfully fly to space, circled

around the earth about 14 circle and then returned ．I was honored

to have given the chance to be the first Chinese to travel in space．