第二节： 书面表达 (满分30分)

在紧张的高三备考阶段，英语王老师为了提高复习效率，广泛征求学生意见，并借此训练学生的书面表达能力。假如你叫张华，请根据以下提示，给老师写封信，表达你的需求和建议。

　　 　 ● 为夯实基础，适当放慢进度，留出思考和消化的时间；

　　 　 ● 请反复训练易错的知识点，提供典型试题；

　　 　 ● 指导写作方面的方法；

　　 　 ● 精选回家作业，减少作业量；

　　　 ● …… (个人补充)

注意：

1．短文必须包括以上要点以及个人的补充要求或建议，不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。

2．词数：120个左右。开头已给出，不计词数。

Mr. Wang,

Thank you for providing us with an opportunity to share our views.

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Yours

Li Hua

第一节：短文改错(共10小题,每小题1分，满分10分)

下面短文中共有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。

　 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

　 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　 注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　　　　 2. 只允许修改10处，多者 (从第11处起) 不计分。

例如：It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 the　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Luckily I was completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at 　　　　 am 　around 8 pm in Friday evening. on

During the summer holidays this year, I thought I should do anything meaningful instead of staying at home, so I have got a job at a KFC fast food restaurant, worked there as a cleaner. I worked seven hours a day for three weeks.

　　　 The job was hard and bored and seemed endless, which made me so tired that I nearly gave it in half way, but I stuck to it with determinations. Every day I started off for work early in the morning and got home lately in the evening. Finally I finished the job before the new term begins.

　　　 Now, I understand that labor means. I think it is really successful experience.