英语课上，老师要求同学相互修改作文。假设以下文章为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。文章中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　　　 2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

请同学们严格按宁夏高考考试说明修改！

Dear Boy,

　 Glad to get your letter. I hope you’re well now. No one love you any more if you do not wear expensive clothes. You are so a clever boy and always work very hardly. I am sure you’ll have a promising future. Sometimes some people judged a person by the clothes he wears, but time will soon prove you are wrong. Knowledge is beauty. It lasts longer and seems much more nicer than the clothes one wears. Who cares that Marie Cruie was wearing when she won the Nobel Prize? To my opinion, clothes are part of life, but not all. Please don’t think too many of it, will you?

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Yours,

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Li Hua

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。

修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

      2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear sir,

　　    I'm glad to recommend (推荐) you to my friend Li Ming. Li Ming was born in July 15 , 1974 in Beijing. ,He graduated from Xisi Primary School in 1986 .　　　　　　　　

　　    When he was in the middle school, he did good in maths, physics and chemistry and fond of art. After graduating from No. 4 High School, he entered   Beijing University study physics. After four year of hard work there, he went to the United States for further study. Because of his excellent work, he get a doctor's degree in physics in this year. He is now in good health but would like to make contributions to our country．I will be most gratefully if you consider my recommendation．

　　Looking forward to receive your early reply

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　        Yours truly,

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　        Wang Lin

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。

修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

      2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear sir,

　　    I'm glad to recommend (推荐) you to my friend Li Ming. Li Ming was born in July 15 , 1974 in Beijing. ,He graduated from Xisi Primary School in 1986 .　　　　　　　　

　　    When he was in the middle school, he did good in maths, physics and chemistry and fond of art. After graduating from No. 4 High School, he entered   Beijing University study physics. After four year of hard work there, he went to the United States for further study. Because of his excellent work, he get a doctor's degree in physics in this year. He is now in good health but would like to make contributions to our country．I will be most gratefully if you consider my recommendation．

　　Looking forward to receive your early reply

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　Yours truly,

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　        Wang Lin

短文改错（满分10分）

文中共有10处语言错误，增加：在此处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出修改的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

　　   I'm glad to recommend (推荐) you to my friend Li Ming. Li Ming was

born in July 15, 1974, in Beijing. He graduated from Xisi Primary School  in 1986.　　　　　　　　

When he was in the middle school, he did good in maths, physics and

chemistry and fond of art. After graduating from No. 4 High School, he

entered into Beijing University to study physics. After four year of hard work

there, he went to the United States for further study. Because of his

excellent work, he get a doctor's degree in physics in this year. He is

now in good health but would like to make contributions to our country．I

will be most gratefully if you consider my recommendation．

Looking forward to receive your early reply

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　                   Yours truly,

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　                   Wang Lin

文中共有10处语言错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在此处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出修改的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。
Dear sir,
　　    I'm glad to recommend (推荐) my friend Li Ming to you. Li Ming was born in July 15, 1974 in Beijing. He graduated from Xisi Primary School in 1986 .When he was in the middle school, he did good in maths, physics and chemistry and fond of art. After graduating from No. 4 High School, he entered Beijing University study physics. After four year of hard work there, he went to the United States for further study. Because of his excellent work, he get a doctor's degree in physics in last year. He is now in good health but would like to make contributions to our country．I will be most gratefully if you consider my recommendation．
　　    Looking forward to receive your early reply!
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　              Yours truly,
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　              Wang Lin